Question

【題目】短文改錯(cuò)

假定英語(yǔ)課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請(qǐng)你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中共有10處語(yǔ)言錯(cuò)誤，每句中最多有兩處。每處錯(cuò)誤涉及一個(gè)單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

增加：在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏詞符號(hào)（/\），并在該句下面寫出該加的詞。

刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（\）劃掉。

修改：在錯(cuò)的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。

注意：

1．每處錯(cuò)誤及其修改均僅限一詞；

2．只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計(jì)分。

The winter holiday is coming, which made me excited. I have been looking forward at relaxing myself. I’d like to go skating, climb mountains and see several movie. I think I can play the basketball with my classmates. How a wonderful time I’ll have during the winter holiday! However, my parents think different. They don’t want me go out. They are afraid I’ll be knocked down by a truck, fallen off a tree, or fight with others. Beside, they are afraid I will lose my way. I hate being treated like a bird keeping in a cage. To get more freedom, I will try to persuade them.

Answer 1

【答案】

【1】made改為makes；

【2】at改為to；

【3】movie改為movies

【4】去掉the；

【5】How改為What；

【6】different 改為differently

【7】加to；

【8】fallen改為fall；

【9】Beside改為Besides；

【10】keeping改為kept；

【解析】

試題分析：短文改錯(cuò)題。

【1】made改為makes；文中第一句The winter holiday is coming, which made me excited.前面用的是一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)，后面要時(shí)態(tài)一致。主語(yǔ)是the winter holiday單數(shù)，后面make要變成單三形式，故made改為makes。

【2】at改為to；考查固定搭配。文中第二句I have been looking forward at...look forward to期待，盼望，故at改為to。

【3】movie改為movies；文中第三句climb mountains and see several movie.前面mountains用的是復(fù)數(shù)，and連接兩個(gè)并列的短語(yǔ)，所以movie也要用復(fù)數(shù)，故movie改為movies。

【4】去掉the；考查固定用法。文中第四句I think I can play the basketball with my classmates. 打籃球是play basketball，中間不需要冠詞the，故去掉the。

【5】How改為What；考查感嘆句。文中第五句 How a wonderful time ...由how和what引導(dǎo)的感嘆句主要有兩種形式：①what+(a/an)+adj.+n.+主語(yǔ)+謂語(yǔ)+(it is).；②How+adj.（adv.）+主語(yǔ)+謂語(yǔ)+(it is).根據(jù)原文可知，what更符合題意，故How改為What。

【6】different 改為differently；文中第六句my parents think different. Think是動(dòng)詞，動(dòng)詞后面是用副詞來(lái)修飾，故different 改為differently。

【7】加to；考查want的用法。文中第七句They don’t want me go out. want的用法：want to do sth；想要做某事；want sb to do sth 想要某人做某事；故加to。

【8】fallen改為fall；文中第八句 I’ll be knocked down by a truck, fallen off a tree, or fight with others.主語(yǔ)是 I’ll，連詞or連接兩個(gè)并列短語(yǔ)，后面的是動(dòng)詞原形，故fallen改為fall。

【9】Beside改為Besides；文中第九句Beside, they are afraid..句子開(kāi)頭且用逗號(hào)隔開(kāi)，所以前面是一個(gè)連詞，另外，除…之外（還有）是besides，故Beside改為Besides。

【10】keeping改為kept；文中第十句I hate being treated like a bird keeping in a cage. 句意：我討厭像籠子里的鳥(niǎo)一樣對(duì)待。后面的是一個(gè)后置定語(yǔ)，主語(yǔ)是the bird，物作主語(yǔ)，后面要用過(guò)去分詞，故keeping改為kept。