Question

【題目】短文改錯
假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中共有10處語言錯誤，每句中最多有兩處。錯誤涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改。
增加：在缺詞處加一個漏字符號（∧），并在其下面寫出該加的詞。
刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（＼）劃掉。
修改：在錯的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。
注意：1）每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞；
2）只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計分。
A college graduate was new in the job and she found something really strange. One of her colleague was a lazy man, who usually played his digital camera or listen to music during working time. To her surprised, the boss never blamed him because his behavior.
One day, her colleague was listening to the music while the boss came and said serious, “the host computer has something wrong.” The colleague rushed to the controlling center to solving the problem and began to fix them silently. Twenty minutes later, and the host computer reworked normally. Then the graduate realized the economic loss what her colleague had saved this time must have been hundreds of his salary.

Answer 1

【答案】①colleague – colleagues ②listen - listened ③surprised- surprise ④because后加of ⑤while-when ⑥serious-seriously ⑦solving- solve ⑧them -it ⑨and 去掉 ⑩ what – that/which

【解析】本文屬于記敘文，介紹了公司里一個喜歡玩相機(jī)聽音樂的員工幫助老板修好電腦服務(wù)器的小故事。

①考查名詞單復(fù)數(shù)。短語"one of....."意為“....之一”，后面要接可數(shù)名詞復(fù)數(shù)形式，所以本句使用復(fù)數(shù)名詞colleagues。

②考查時態(tài)。本句中動詞played his digital camera與listened to music是并列關(guān)系，都在句中做謂語動詞，所以都要使用一般過去式.

③考查固定短語。名詞surprise作為介詞to的賓語構(gòu)成介詞短語to one's surprise讓某人驚訝的是。

④考查固定搭配。連詞because的后面要接句子表示原因，介詞短語because of后面要接名詞或名詞短語表示原因，本句中his behavior是名詞短語，所以要使用介詞短語because of。

⑤考查固定句式。句式be doing sth when....正在做某事在這時.....；其中的when是并列連詞，意為“在那時.....”，其后面的從句表示意料之外的事情。

⑥考查副詞。在英語中副詞通常做狀語修飾形容詞、副詞或動詞，形容詞通常做定語或表語修飾名詞。本句中副詞seriously在句中做狀語修飾動詞said。

⑦考查不定式。本句中不定式短語to solve the problem在句中做目的狀語。

⑧考查代詞。本句中代詞it指代上文提及的同一事物the host computer，表示特指。

⑨考查句子結(jié)構(gòu)。本句是一個單獨的單句，沒有和其他句子構(gòu)成任何關(guān)系，所以原句中的and是多余的。句意：20分鐘以后，服務(wù)器恢復(fù)正常了。

⑩考查定語從句。本句中定語從句的先行詞是the economic loss，關(guān)系代詞that/which指代先行詞在句中作為動詞save的賓語，可以省略。