3.假定英語(yǔ)課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文,請(qǐng)你修改你同桌寫的以下作文.文中共有10處語(yǔ)言錯(cuò)誤,每句中最多有兩處.每處錯(cuò)誤僅涉及一個(gè)單詞的增加、刪除或修改.
增加:在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏字符號(hào)(Λ),并在其下面寫出該加的詞.
刪除:把多余的詞用斜線(\)劃掉.
修改:在錯(cuò)的詞下面畫一橫線,并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞.
注意:1.每處錯(cuò)誤及其修改均僅限一詞;
   2.只允許修改10處,多者(從第11處起)不計(jì)分.
Dear Brown,
Last summer I take a part-time job in the International Camp for children.I have told one more worker will be needed in this year and I think you are fit for it.How about join us?The camp is at the foot of a small hill closed to a river.It is such beautiful a place!We can hear birds singing happy all around.Everybody sleeps in tents,that is very exciting.We usually work only five hours a day,so we will have plenty of spare time visit the area and have  fun.I am sure it will be an unforgettable experience.If you have interests in it,reply to me soon.

分析 本文介紹了夏令營(yíng)活動(dòng)的時(shí)間地點(diǎn)及其活動(dòng)中的住所,信中邀請(qǐng)對(duì)方去參加這次夏令營(yíng),并指出了參加夏令營(yíng)很有趣,可能會(huì)是一次難忘的經(jīng)歷.

解答 Dear Brown,
Last summer I take a part-time job in the International Camp for children.I have∧told one more worker will be needed in this year and I think you are fit for it.How about join us?The camp is at the foot of a small hill closed to a river.It is such beautiful a place!We can hear birds singing happy all around.Everybody sleeps in tents,that is very exciting.We usually work only five hours a day,so we will have plenty of spare time∧visit the area and have fun.I am sure it will be an unforgettable experience.If you have interests in it,reply to me soon.
詳解:
1.take改為took;考查動(dòng)詞的時(shí)態(tài),本文是記錄過(guò)去發(fā)生的事情,故使用過(guò)去時(shí).
2.told前面加been;考查動(dòng)詞的語(yǔ)態(tài),主語(yǔ)I與動(dòng)詞told之間是被動(dòng)關(guān)系,所以have后面加上been構(gòu)成被動(dòng)語(yǔ)態(tài).
3.去掉in;考查介詞,表示時(shí)間的名詞前面有this,that,next,last等詞修飾時(shí),前面不能再加介詞in.
4.join改為joining;考查非謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞,about是介詞,后面接動(dòng)名詞.
5.closed改為close;考查形容詞,close to是固定短語(yǔ),意為"靠近,接近";closed是過(guò)去分詞,作形容詞講時(shí)意為"關(guān)著的,不公開(kāi)的".
6.such改為so;考查語(yǔ)法知識(shí),so后面跟形容詞或副詞,such后面接的是名詞性短語(yǔ),故這里用副詞so修飾beautiful.
7.happy改為happily;考查副詞,此處用副詞作形容詞修飾動(dòng)詞.
8.that改為which;考查關(guān)系代詞,分析句子可知這是非限制性定語(yǔ)從句,不能用that引導(dǎo).
9.visit前面加to;考查動(dòng)詞不定式,此處用不定式短語(yǔ)表示目的.
10.interests改為interest;考查名詞,interest作為"興趣"講是不可數(shù)名詞,不能用復(fù)數(shù)形式.

點(diǎn)評(píng) 整體理解短文,充分運(yùn)用所學(xué)的基礎(chǔ)知識(shí),包括一些實(shí)詞和虛詞的用法,固定短語(yǔ)搭配,習(xí)慣性用法,結(jié)合上下文整體關(guān)系,找出錯(cuò)誤并加以修正.

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