Question

7．2015年9月份，你被錄取（be admitted to）到連江二中（No.2 Middle School of Lianjiang County），已經(jīng)經(jīng)歷了2個多月的學(xué)習(xí)生活．以My New School Life為題談?wù)勛约簩�學(xué)校，學(xué)習(xí)，同學(xué)，老師，今后理想等看法和想法．字數(shù)120字左右．

Answer 1

分析 本題屬于開放類作文，本文要求考生以My New School Life為題談?wù)勛约簩�學(xué)校，學(xué)習(xí)，同學(xué)，老師，今后理想等看法和想法． 需要使用高級詞匯以及高級句式，另外還需要合適的連接詞連接所有要點．
【名師點睛】這篇范文屬于作文中較好的一篇．在寫作的過程中，作者使用了合適的連接詞first of all，secondly，besides以及finally把四個要點串聯(lián)成文．同時也使用了較多的高級句式，如形式賓語句I find it much more necessary to develop a good learning habit，make full use of time and work harder than ever before．非限制性定語從句Besides，more new trees have been planted recently，which makes our school more beautiful and a better place to study．強調(diào)句I do feel hopeful about my future because of the help of my kind teachers and classmates．這些高級句式的運用讓文章文采斐然．

解答 I'm very lucky to be admitted into No.2 Middle School of Lianjiang County．After two months study here，I gradually adapt to the life in high school and have learned a lot．
    First of all，I find it much more necessary to develop a good learning habit，make full use of time and work harder than ever before．（高分句型一）Secondly，I have joined the English Club since a lot of clubs have been set up in my school not only because I want to learn English well with all my heart but I also feel it a great opportunity to make more friends．（高分句型二）Besides，more new trees have been planted recently，which makes our school more beautiful and a better place to study．（高分句型三）Finally，although at present I have some worries，I do feel hopeful about my future because of the help of my kind teachers and classmates．（115words）

點評 英語寫作是一項主觀性較強的測試題．它不僅考查學(xué)生的寫作基礎(chǔ)而且還考查學(xué)生在寫作過程中綜合運用語言的能力．在撰寫時要注意主謂語一致，時態(tài)呼應(yīng)，用詞貼切等．要提高英語寫作水平，需要兩方面的訓(xùn)練：一是語言基礎(chǔ)方面的訓(xùn)練，要有扎實的造句、翻譯等基本功，即用詞法、句法等知識造出正確無誤的句子；二是寫作知識和能力 方面的訓(xùn)練以掌握寫作方面的基本方法和技巧．