Question

下面短文中有10處語言錯(cuò)誤。請?jiān)谟绣e(cuò)誤的地方增加、刪除或修改某個(gè)單詞。

增加：在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏字符號（∧），并在其下面寫上該加的詞。

刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（\）劃掉。

修改：在錯(cuò)的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫上修改后的詞。

注意：1.每處錯(cuò)誤及其修改均僅限一詞；

2.只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計(jì)分。

 

This morning on my way to school I was deep moved by what I saw outside a Patience is of a great importance in our daily life. One day I waited for a bus to come at a stop. 30 minute had passed, and no bus came. Upset and annoyed, I decided to walk with foot. But no sooner had I left when the bus arrived. I thought if I waited for one more minute, I would have caught it. If I had chosen to take the next bus, I would have had to wait for other 30 minutes. Only then do I realize my problem. Being impatient will possible waste the effort that we have put in. Now whenever I am close to lose my patience, I’ll think of this experience.

Answer 1

1.去掉a

2.minute----minutes

3.and --but

4.with ---on

5.when --- than

6.waited前面加had

7.other-- another

8.do --did

9.possible --- possibly

10.lose---losing

【解析】

1.小題1】be動詞+of后面用抽象名詞，抽象名詞是不可數(shù)名詞，前面不能用冠詞，去掉a。

2.小題2】30分鐘是復(fù)數(shù)形式， minute----minutes。

3.小題3】等公交車等了30分鐘但是沒有公交車來，前后句是轉(zhuǎn)折關(guān)系and –but。

4.小題4】“步行” on foot.是固定短語。介詞with ---on。

5.小題5】no sooner. . . than “一. . .就”是 固定短語。 when --- than

6.小題6】if虛擬語氣與過去事實(shí)虛擬，if從句用過去完成時(shí)，waited前面加had。

7.小題7】又等了30分鐘，表示“又一” another+數(shù)字 ，other-- another。

8.小題8】通篇是一般過去時(shí)，現(xiàn)在時(shí) do –did。

9.小題9】副詞修飾動詞，形容詞possible --- possibly。

10.小題10】介詞后用doing形式，close to +doing形式， lose---losing。

考點(diǎn)：短文改錯(cuò)