【題目】短文改錯文中共有10處語言錯誤,每句中最多有兩處。

Dear Sir,

I’m glad to recommend my friend Li Ming to you. Li Ming was born on July 15, 1974 in Beijing. When he was in the middle school, he did well in several subject, including math, physics and chemistry and was fond with art. Later, his efforts paid off when he admitted into Beijing University majoring in physics. Before four years of hard work there, he went to abroad for further education. Because of his excellent work and performance, he gets a doctor’s degree this year. He is now in good health but would like to come back home to make contributions to our country. I will be most gratefully if you consider his recommendation and offer him a job in your company.

Looking forward to receive your early reply.

Yours truly,

Wang Lin

【答案】

【1】subject改為subjects

【2】with改為of

【3】was 加在admitted前

【4】Before改為After

【5】went to(刪去to)

【6】gets改為got

【7】but改為and

【8】gratefully改為grateful

【9】his改為my

【10】receive改為receiving

【解析】

試題分析:本文屬于應(yīng)用文,是一篇推薦信,王明向?qū)Ψ酵扑]自己的朋友李明,并在文章中介紹了李明的具體情況。

【1】subject改為subjects 考查名詞單復(fù)數(shù)。名詞“subject科目”是一個可數(shù)名詞,前面有形容詞several修飾,說明應(yīng)該使用復(fù)數(shù)形式subjects。

【2】with改為of 考查形容詞短語。形容詞短語be fond of喜歡....;句意:當(dāng)他在中學(xué)的時候,在很多學(xué)科上表現(xiàn)很好,包括數(shù)學(xué)、物理和化學(xué),也很喜歡美術(shù)課。

【3】在admitted前 加was 考查被動語態(tài)。短語be admitted into....被...錄;句意:后來他的努力得到了回報,被北京大學(xué)錄取。

【4】Before改為After 考查介詞。句意:在大學(xué)四年努力以后,他去國外深造。本句使用after“在...之后”屬于常識,通常都是大學(xué)以后去國外。

【5】went to(刪去to) 考查副詞。本句中副詞abroad在國外,去國外,該詞不能做動詞短語go to的賓語。名詞或代詞才可以做賓語。所以刪除to。

【6】gets改為got 考查時態(tài)。這部分使用了一般過去時,介紹Li Ming過去的學(xué)習(xí)生活,要使用一般過去時。所以本句使用got。

【7】but改為and 考查連詞。句意:現(xiàn)在他的身體很好,也想回國為國家做貢獻。上下文之間是順接關(guān)系,所以使用并列連詞and連接上下文。

【8】greatfully改為grateful 考查形容詞。在英語中通常使用形容詞和系動詞連用構(gòu)成系表結(jié)構(gòu)。句意:如果你考慮我的推薦并給他提供一份工作,我會非常感激的。

【9】his改為my 考查代詞。本文中王林向?qū)Ψ酵扑]李明,請對方考慮自己的推薦。所以使用動詞my代替自己。

【10】receive改為receiving 考查動名詞。動詞短語look forward to sth/doing sth期待...,其中的to是介詞,后面要接名詞或動名詞做賓語。所以本句使用動名詞receiving做賓語。

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