【題目】假定英語(yǔ)課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請(qǐng)你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中共有10處語(yǔ)言錯(cuò)誤,每句中最多有兩處。每處錯(cuò)誤僅涉及一個(gè)單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

增加：在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏字符號(hào)(∧)，并在其下面寫岀該加的詞。

刪除：把多余的詞用斜線( \ )劃掉。

修改：在錯(cuò)的詞下畫一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。

注意：1. 每處錯(cuò)誤及其修改均僅限一詞；

2. 只允許修改10處，多者(從第11處起)不計(jì)分。

I was so proud that I heard my team won the ice hockey competition. It made me feeling like I could achieve anything. Only three years before, I was terrified of walking or skating on ice. To deal with this, I decided to join skating club. My teacher was great but before I knew it, I was able to skate. He then persuades me to try ice hockey. I loved it and was soon practising with my local team on almost every evening. We’re now training hardly for national competitions and hope to be champion one day, but his ultimate goal is to be an ice hockey teacher and help people learn to play this game.

【答案】1. that→when

2. feeling→feel

3. before→ago

4.在join后面加a

5. but→and

6. persuades→persuaded

7.去掉almost前面的on

8. hardly→hard

9. champion→champions

10. his→my

【解析】

這是一篇記敘文。聽(tīng)到獲得冰球比賽冠軍的消息后，作者回憶了三年前的艱苦訓(xùn)練過(guò)程，并希望以后能成為一名冰球老師。

1. 考查狀語(yǔ)從句。句意：當(dāng)我聽(tīng)說(shuō)我們隊(duì)贏得了冰球比賽時(shí)，我感覺(jué)如此自豪。根據(jù)句意可知，此處不是so…that…的結(jié)果狀語(yǔ)從句，而是when引導(dǎo)的時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)從句。故將that改為when。

2. 考查固定搭配。句意：它使我覺(jué)得我可以做成任何事情。make作使役動(dòng)詞時(shí)結(jié)構(gòu)是make sb. do sth.，所以此處應(yīng)用feel作賓語(yǔ)補(bǔ)足語(yǔ)。故將feeling改為feel。

3. 考查時(shí)間副詞。句意：僅僅在三年前，我還害怕在冰上行走或溜冰。ago立足于現(xiàn)在，表示從現(xiàn)在起，若干時(shí)間之前，通常與一般過(guò)去時(shí)連用；before立足過(guò)去，表示從過(guò)去某一時(shí)刻起，若干時(shí)間以前，通常與過(guò)去完成時(shí)連用。此處是一般過(guò)去時(shí)，指 “三年前”，應(yīng)用three years ago。故將before改為ago。

4. 考查冠詞。club為可數(shù)名詞，泛指“一個(gè)俱樂(lè)部”，skating的首字母發(fā)音是輔音，所以應(yīng)加上冠詞a。故在join后面加a。

5. 考查連詞。句意：我的老師很好，并且在我知道之前，我已經(jīng)能滑冰了。分析句意可知，前后句邏輯關(guān)系為并列關(guān)系，應(yīng)用連詞and連接。故將but改為and。

6. 考查時(shí)態(tài)。根據(jù)文章內(nèi)容可知，這里是回憶過(guò)去發(fā)生的事情，應(yīng)用一般過(guò)去時(shí)。故將persuades改為persuaded。

7. 考查固定用法。由every構(gòu)成的短語(yǔ)作時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)時(shí)，前面不用介詞，故去掉almost前面的on。

8. 考查副詞。句意：我們現(xiàn)在為國(guó)家性比賽刻苦訓(xùn)練，希望有一天能成為冠軍。hardly是副詞，表示“幾乎不”；hard作副詞時(shí)意為“努力，刻苦”，此處表示“刻苦訓(xùn)練”，應(yīng)用hard。故將hardly改為hard。

9. 考查名詞單復(fù)數(shù)。由主語(yǔ)We和national competitions可知，此處應(yīng)用復(fù)數(shù)champions。故將champion改為champions。

10. 考查代詞。句意：但是我的最終目標(biāo)是成為一名冰球老師，并幫助人們做這項(xiàng)運(yùn)動(dòng)。由上下文語(yǔ)境和邏輯關(guān)系可知，此處是 “我的” 最終目標(biāo)，應(yīng)用my。故將his改為my。

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