Question

學校網(wǎng)站新開設了一個“英語寫作”欄目，現(xiàn)請你為該欄目寫一篇英文介紹，內(nèi)容包括：

開設目的：以便學生發(fā)表英語作文，進行交流，提高英語寫作能力。

欄目優(yōu)勢：教師在線指導等。

歡迎投稿，優(yōu)秀稿件有獎。

參考詞匯：欄目 column 發(fā)表post（vt.） 在線 online

注意：詞數(shù)120左右。文章開頭已寫好，不計詞數(shù)。

Welcome to the column “English Writing”!

 

 

 

 

 

Answer 1

Welcome to the column “English Writing”! Recently the school website has set up a new column called “English Writing”, which provides the students with the chances to post their compositions and communicate with each other. Not only can students improve their writing ability in this way, but they can strengthen their self-confidence.

The column has an outstanding advantage over other columns. It invites teachers to chat and give advice online. If necessary, the students can have a direct “ask and answer” with the teacher.

Don’t hesitate to post your writing. We welcome the interesting stories in daily life. What’s more, if the story is organized well enough, the writer will be rewarded for it.

【解析】

試題分析：考查提綱式作文。寫好提綱式作文的關鍵是認真審題和分析所給的提綱，因此考生首先要認真閱讀前面的提示，認清寫作要求和提綱之間的關系，然后確定文章的主題、文體、人稱和時態(tài)。根據(jù)所給提綱，列出要點，并以此為基礎充分發(fā)揮自己的想象力，靈活運用英語知識，采用不同的表達方式將各要點完整地表述出來，注意主次分明，詳略得當。語言力求準確、簡潔。根據(jù)情景的發(fā)展，按順序安排好材料。同時應選用合適的連接詞或過渡詞，使文章具有一定的連貫性�？忌�必須認真查驗是否有漏寫情況，有無拼寫錯誤及標點誤用等

【亮點說明】Recently the school website has set up a new column called “English Writing”, which provides the students with the chances to post their compositions and communicate with each other..這句話用了which引導的非限定性定語從句，Not only can students improve their writing ability in this way, but they can strengthen their self-confidence.這句話用了倒裝結構，If necessary, the students can have a direct “ask and answer” with the teacher.這句話也是用了省略結構，這篇文章還用了What’s more等關聯(lián)詞使文章更加連貫。

考點：考查提綱類作文