Question

13．最近，你班同學就"男女生之間是否存在真正的友誼"這一話題展開討論．請你根據下表所提供的信息，給報社寫一封信，并簡單地發(fā)表自己的看法．詞數120左右．

60%的同學認為	40%的同學認為
1．男女同學之間存在真正的友誼． 2．追求友誼是人的天性（human nature）． 3．互相幫助，互相學習，共同提高	1．男女生之間不存在真正的友誼． 2．易造成早戀（fall in love at an early age）現象． 3．影響學習成績．

Answer 1

分析 本篇寫作是書信，題材是社會現象的兩種不同觀點．話題是男女生的友誼，這種文章一般層次比較清晰，四段：第一段為總述；第二段正方觀點及依據；第三段反方觀點及依據；第四段自己觀點．要注意的是1．在列舉雙方依據時要盡量使語言多樣化；2．自我觀點表達時要有正確的判斷，要有辯證的思維．一篇文章需要有正確的句子才能明了清晰的表達作者的意思．考生應明白高考書面表達題既不是漢譯英，也不是可任意發(fā)揮的作文．它要求的是將所規(guī)定的材料內容經整理后展開思維，考查運用所學英語知識準確地表達意思的能力．
【亮點說明】本文結構緊湊，層次分明，而且使用了多種表達：be for 支持，seek friendship追求友誼，human nature人性，On the other hand另一方面，fall in love戀愛，In my opinion以我的觀點來看，
Opinions are divided on the question.60% of the students are for the idea that real friendship exists between them．（高分句型一）
On the other hand，40% think that there is no real friendship between boys and girls．（高分句型二）

解答 Dear editor，
    I am writing to tell you about the discussions we've had about whether real friendship exists between boy students and girl students．
    Opinions are divided on the question.60% of the students are for the idea that real friendship exists between them．（高分句型一）They believe that it is human nature to seek friendship．It helps them learn from each other and improve themselves together．
    On the other hand，40% think that there is no real friendship between boys and girls．（高分句型二）Because it can easily lead to falling in love at an early age and thus affects their study．
    In my opinion，boys and girls can develop their friendship properly．
                                                  Yours truly，
                                                    Li Hua

點評 考生應該用自己最熟悉、最有把握的詞、短語及句式，按一定的邏輯順序和意義層次完成短文，劃分好文章的自然段落，注意段落之間的發(fā)展和連貫．盡量使用不同長度的句子，使句型多樣化．適當使用連詞，使句子間的銜接自然流暢．