Question

【題目】假定你是李華，是校報小記者。請你為校報寫一篇英語短文，介紹最近在我國很多城市發(fā)生的霧霾天氣。請參考以下要點：

1．危害：阻礙交通，危害健康

2．原因：空氣污染

3．如何自我防護：霧霾天氣早晚少開窗戶；多吃水果補充維生素

注意：

1．詞數120左右；

2．適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫。

參考詞匯：霧霾haze 維生素vitamin

Recently haze pollution has happened in many cities of China. ______________________________________

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Answer 1

【答案】One Possible Version

Recently haze pollution has happened in many cities of China. It’s one of the most dangerous weather conditions. Many accidents have occurred due to low visibility caused by haze. What’s worse, it also affects our health. if breathing in haze, people may feel uncomfortable and get ill.

The reason for haze is air pollution. It results from waste gases released from cars, factories or construction sties. In view of the above, we need to protect ourselves from haze pollution. First of all, in case of haze pollution, we shouldn’t open the windows or take exercise before the sun rises and after sunset. Besides, we’d better wear masks when we go outside. What’s more, we should eat more fruit, from which we can get enough vitamins to build up the resistance to disease.

【解析】這是一篇提綱類作文，文章要點已經給出，在寫這篇文章時要注意以下幾點：

1.整篇文章時態(tài)以一般現在時為主。

2.要點要齊全，但是不要進行簡單的羅列，可以采用適當的連接詞，或者是表遞進關系的副詞如What’s worse、In view of the above、First of all、Besides，使上下文銜接自然，行文自然流暢。

3.注意語氣，此文是為校報寫的英語短文，所以語氣上應該比較中肯，不應該出現過多的帶有個人感情色彩的詞語。

4.此作文要分三個部分寫，每個部分要列舉一下例子，最好用簡單句與復合句結合的方法寫作如we should eat more fruit, from which we can get enough vitamins to build up the resistance to disease。

5.多采用一些高級句型，如we’d better wear masks when we go outside，It’s one of the most dangerous weather conditions，同時使用一些詞組如due to ， result from，get enough，build up等。