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6．假如你是某中學(xué)高三畢業(yè)生李華，你將作為畢業(yè)生代表在畢業(yè)晚會(huì)上用英文作一簡(jiǎn)短的告別演講，談?wù)勀銓?duì)高中生活的看法：
（1）對(duì)獲得的幫助表示感謝；
（2）對(duì)學(xué)弟、學(xué)妹的建議；
（3）努力學(xué)習(xí)，實(shí)現(xiàn)人生夢(mèng)想；
（4）對(duì)母校和老師的祝福．
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My teachers an fellow students，
In a couple of weeks，we'll say goodbye to our mother school．How time flies!As  senior three student，I have much to share with you．Firstly，I would like to show my appreciation to those standing by me all the way，teachers，parents and friends included．Without their help and advice，my life would be different．Secondly，I hope that all the younger fellows can make full use of time，because time and tide wait for no man．Above all，I've made up my mind to make every effort to study，for I believe hard work is the key to success．Just as the old saying goes，"no pains，no gains．"
Finally，on behalf of all the graduates present here，let me extend our sincere wishes for our mother school and respectable teachers．Thank you!．

Answer 1

分析 這是在畢業(yè)晚會(huì)上作的一個(gè)簡(jiǎn)短的告別演講．根據(jù)題目呀可知用第一人稱和一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)．內(nèi)容包括：一表明演講主題；二對(duì)獲得的幫助表示感謝，對(duì)學(xué)弟、學(xué)妹的建議以及自己努力學(xué)習(xí)，實(shí)現(xiàn)人生夢(mèng)想的決心；三對(duì)母校和老師的祝福．
高分句型：
1．Firstly，I would like to show my appreciation to those standing by me all the way，teachers，parents and friends included．句子里show my appreciation to 表示"對(duì)某人展示感激"；standing by me 是現(xiàn)在分詞做定語(yǔ)，修飾 those，表示"支持"； included是過(guò)去分詞做定語(yǔ)，修飾teachers，parents and friends．
首先，我要對(duì)一直幫助我的老師，父母和朋友表達(dá)我的感激．
2．Finally，on behalf of all the graduates present here，let me extend our sincere wishes for our mother school and respectable teachers．句子里on behalf of 表示"代表"；the graduates 表示"畢業(yè)生"；extend表示"給予"； respectable 表示"值得尊重的"．
最后，代表所有出席的畢業(yè)生，讓我把我們真誠(chéng)的祝愿給予我們的母校和這里值得尊重的老師們．

解答 My teachers and fellow students，
    In a couple of weeks，we'll say goodbye to our mother school．How time flies!As a senior three student，I have much to share with you．（表明演講主題）
   Firstly，I would like to show my appreciation to those standing by me all the way，teachers，parents and friends included．【高分句型一】Without their help and advice，my life would be different．Secondly，I hope that all the younger fellows can make full use of time，because time and tide wait for no man．Above all，I've made up my mind to make every effort to study，for I believe hard work is the key to success．Just as the old saying goes，"no pains，no gains．"（對(duì)獲得的幫助表示感謝，對(duì)學(xué)弟、學(xué)妹的建議以及自己努力學(xué)習(xí)，實(shí)現(xiàn)人生夢(mèng)想的決心）
  Finally，on behalf of all the graduates present here，let me extend our sincere wishes for our mother school and respectable teachers．【高分句型二】Thank you!（對(duì)母校和老師的祝福）

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