Question

【題目】South Africa’s Street Store doesn’t just help to clothe the homeless, but also gives them the shopping experience of choosing what they want. With the idea to give the homeless the same dignity as customers who can pay, the Street Store sets up their pop-up cardboard shop in Cape Town, inviting customers in need to browse through the offerings and choose an outfit for themselves from the hundreds of donated items at their will.

The Street Store works closely with local council to get permission to pop-up their sidewalk shops in poor areas around Cape Town. Because of the social conditions in South Africa, over half of the children live in poverty, making the Street Store even more popular.

The Street Store displays a row of cardboard “hangers” (衣架), with boxes neatly arranged below each one. On the hangers hang shirts, T-shirts, trousers and dresses donated by the Cape Town public. In the boxes below, multiple pairs of shoes await a new owner. Street Store volunteers also act as store consultants, offering fashion advice to their customers as they try on chosen donated items.

The Street Store has already reached thousands in the Cape Town area, with over 1,000 satisfied homeless customers visiting on their first day in operation. The program gives the homeless not only a change to pick up some needed clothing, but also restores confidence by giving them a retail experience—even when pocket money doesn’t allow it.

【寫(xiě)作內(nèi)容】

1. 用約30個(gè)單詞概述上述信息的主要內(nèi)容；

2.span> 結(jié)合上述信息，談?wù)勀銓?duì)the Street Store的看法；

3. 假設(shè)你是the Street Store活動(dòng)的參與者，你會(huì)怎么做？（不少于兩點(diǎn)）

【寫(xiě)作要求】

1. 寫(xiě)作過(guò)程中不能直接引用原文語(yǔ)句；

2. 作文中不能出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名和學(xué)校名稱(chēng)；

3. 不必寫(xiě)標(biāo)題。

【評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)】

內(nèi)容完整，語(yǔ)言規(guī)范，語(yǔ)篇連貫，詞數(shù)適當(dāng)。

Answer 1

【答案】

One possible version:

The passage mainly tells us that the Street Store in Cape Town offers the poor both shopping experience and clothes donated by the public without hurting their dignity.

What impresses me most is that the “shopping” process serves to lend great dignity to the act of receiving donations. It is widely acknowledged that there are still a large number of people living in poverty, so it is important for individuals to participate in activities to help those in need. In some way, this activity sets a good example for similar events.

As for me, I will offer my help as much as I can and treat the poor with respect and care. I will pick out my old clothes which are still in good shape and donate them to the Street Store. Only when all of us join in the efforts of helping those in poverty can they have a better future.

【解析】

試題分析：本文內(nèi)容包括三部分。本文應(yīng)該用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)，注意增加細(xì)節(jié)，使銜接合理，還要盡量用高中階段學(xué)習(xí)詞匯和句型。注意長(zhǎng)短搭配。

【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】本文內(nèi)容完整，語(yǔ)言規(guī)范，語(yǔ)篇連貫，詞數(shù)適當(dāng)。同時(shí)注意應(yīng)用較高級(jí)的短語(yǔ)和句子為文章增色不少，復(fù)合句比如What impresses me most is that the “shopping” process serves to lend great dignity to the act of receiving donations.還運(yùn)用了倒裝句Only when all of us join in the efforts of helping those in poverty can they have a better future.和participate in以及without hurting their dignity 還有as for 等等。