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【題目】近年來，微信（Wechat）成為了人們?nèi)粘Ｉ�活中必不可少的通訊工具，尤其在春�?jié)期間，“微信搶紅包熱”（Red envelop fever）風靡全國。請對這一現(xiàn)象寫一篇100詞左右的短文，內(nèi)容包括以下幾點：

1.使用微信的利與弊；

2.自己的看法和建議。

In recent years,Wechat is becoming increasingly popular.__________________________________________

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Answer 1

【答案】In recent years,Wechat is becoming increasingly popular. "Red envelop fever" has swept the country especially during this Spring Festival.

There are many reasons for Wechat to be known.To begin with,Wechat is a relatively cheap way of communication,which cuts down the cost of making a phone call.Next,Wechat is to the taste of the majority of people with its various functions.Furthermore,it is available everywhere at any time.

However,problems exist meanwhile.Firstly,our identity can be revealed and we can be in trouble.Moreover,it may make communicating with others face to face less.Finally,our attention might be drawn too much to focus on study.

There is no doubt that Wechat will improve as time goes by.

【解析】試題分析：本文是開放式作文。關(guān)鍵是認真審題和分析前面所給的提示，認清寫作要求和內(nèi)容之間的關(guān)系，然后確定文章的主題、文體、人稱和時態(tài)。本文內(nèi)容要求如下：1.使用微信的利與弊；2.自己的看法和建議。根據(jù)所給要點，并以此為基礎(chǔ)充分發(fā)揮自己的想象力，靈活運用英語知識，采用不同的表達方式將各要點完整地表述出來。寫作時注意時態(tài)、語態(tài)的合理運用，主次分明，詳略得當，語言力求準確、簡潔。根據(jù)情景的發(fā)展，按順序安排好材料。同時應(yīng)選用合適的連接詞或過渡詞，適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫�？忌�必須認真查驗是否有漏寫、錯寫情況，有無拼寫錯誤及標點誤用等。

【亮點說明】

本文是開放式作文。內(nèi)容符合要求，語言簡潔明了，時態(tài)人稱運用準確，結(jié)構(gòu)布局合理，文中使用高級句子。There are many reasons for Wechat to be known動詞不定式一般式的被動式做后置定語；To begin with,Wechat is a relatively cheap way of communication,which cuts down the cost of making a phone call.Next,句中使用動詞不定式的獨立成分，并使用ｗｈｉｃｈ引導非限制性定語從句；Firstly,our identity can be revealed and we can be in trouble.含情態(tài)動詞的被動語態(tài)運用巧妙；There is no doubt that Wechat will improve as time goes by.ｔｈａｔ同位語從句和ａｓ引導的時間狀語從句完美結(jié)合；另外，In recent years, .Furthermore, However, Firstly，Moreover的使用為文章增色添彩。