分析 本文是一篇書信體裁的書面表達,開頭結(jié)尾已經(jīng)給出,所以不用注意格式,只要把內(nèi)容呈現(xiàn)出來即可,但因為是給老師寫信,說話的語氣和措辭要禮貌,盡量用上一些高級的句型和詞匯,比如表示感激的I will be appreciate it if you can …..; Iwould be grateful if you …..; thank you for ….等,表示有困難短語:have difficulty with sth;have trouble in doing sth等.因為提示要點包括三個方面,所以在結(jié)構(gòu)安排上,可以采用三段式.此外,在連詞成篇時,要恰當(dāng)使用連接詞,以使語言通順流暢.
【亮點說明】范文使用典型的三段式結(jié)構(gòu),分別表達了對老師的感激,自己學(xué)習(xí)中的困難以及給老師的教學(xué)建議等,結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊,層次分明.在文中作者使用了to begin with,besides,to be honest,what's more 等插入語和副詞,使文章語言銜接自然流暢.在提出建議時使用了could you please speak more English inClass?和Would you please reduce the amount of English homework?等提出請求,這樣使得語氣更加委婉,增強了建議的可接納性.
解答 Dear Mrs.Chen,
How time flies!I have been your student for nearly half a year.To begin with,I want to say thanks to you for your hard work in the past few months.Without your help,we couldn't have made such great progress in English.(高分句型一)(表達感謝)We have learned a lot about senior English teaching and learning,but still there are some problems.For me,I can't keep so many new words in mind,not to mention how to use them.Also,grammar is a big problem to me.I often mix up these grammatical rules.Would you please help me with those problems?(遇到的問題)
Mrs.Chen,we all like you and your teaching method.As we hope to improve our listening ability,could you please speak more English in Class?(高分句型二)And we can't bear so much homework of nine subjects,so would you please reduce the amount of English homework?(高分句型三)I will be appreciate it if you can give me some advice.(尋求建議)
Best wishes to you and your family!
Yours faithfully,
Wang Gang.
點評 英語寫作是一項主觀性較強的測試題.它不僅考查學(xué)生的寫作基礎(chǔ)而且還考查學(xué)生在寫作過程中綜合運用語言的能力.在撰寫時要注意主謂語一致,時態(tài)呼應(yīng),用詞貼切等.要提高英語寫作水平,需要兩方面的訓(xùn)練:一是語言基礎(chǔ)方面的訓(xùn)練,要有扎實 的造句、翻譯等基本功,即用詞法、句法等知識造出正確無誤的句子;二是寫作知識和能力 方面的訓(xùn)練以掌握寫作方面的基本方法和技巧.
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