Question

【題目】請就“父母與子女的良好關(guān)系”發(fā)表你的看法，包括如下要點：

(1)父母與子女關(guān)系良好的重要性;

(2)你希望與你的父母之間的關(guān)系是怎樣的;

(3)如何才能建立這種關(guān)系?

注意：無需寫標(biāo)題，文章第一句已經(jīng)給出。要求詞數(shù)110左右，可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。

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Answer 1

【答案】An ideal relationship between parents and children is very important for our growth. Parents always show love and concern for us. They are our good listeners，advisers and supporters. With their help，we can overcome many difficulties in our life.

In my opinion，the relationship between parents and children should be one filled with love，care and understanding，in which parents and children show respect for each other and exchange ideas freely.

To build a relationship of this kind，parents should become friends of their children while children ought to place more trust in their parents and give voice to their feelings frankly. Only in this way can we enjoy a harmonious relationship between parents and children. (117 words)

【解析】題目中明確要求：請就“父母與子女的良好關(guān)系”發(fā)表看法，首先，同學(xué)們要點明父母與子女關(guān)系良好的重要性；然后要明確地指出你希望與你的父母之間的關(guān)系是怎樣的；最后說明如何才能建立這種關(guān)系等等。同學(xué)們要能適當(dāng)把握三個部分的內(nèi)容，使文章內(nèi)容相協(xié)調(diào)，使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B接詞，使語義連貫，連接順暢。

【范文亮點】

范文有一些值得大家學(xué)習(xí)的地方，如：文章使用了很多優(yōu)秀的詞匯和短語：show love and concern for參加，overcome many difficulties發(fā)生 ，be filled with上傳， as well as除此之外，等等；文章也使用了多樣的句式，如倒裝句Only in this way can we enjoy a harmonious relationship between parents and children.……，定語從句in which parents and children show respect for each other and exchange ideas freely. 等等。