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4．假設(shè)英語課上，老師要求同桌之間互換修改作文，請修改你同桌的以下作文．文中共有10處語言錯誤，每句中最多有兩處，每處錯誤僅涉及一個單詞的增加，刪除或修改．
增加：在缺詞處加一個漏字符號（^），并在其下面寫出該加的詞．
刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（\）劃掉．
修改：在錯詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞．
注意：1．每處錯誤及其修改均限一詞．
        2．只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計分．
    Last weekend we go mountain climbing．Even the heavy rain in the morning could not prevent us going．Set off very early，we went along an extreme narrow road，all in high spirits．On every side of the road was green fields and some farm houses．We could hear the sound of the rain and our footsteps mixing with our laughter．At noon we reached the top of the  mountain．That surprised us most there was the beauty of scenes．After having short rest there and sharing with the food we had brought，we started going down．It rained even harder．We were wet to the skin，and we still sang and laughed happily．

Answer 1

分析 作者在本文中講述了下雨天爬山的經(jīng)歷，盡管渾身都濕透了，但是卻玩得很高興．

解答 Last weekend we go mountain climbing．Even the heavy rain in the morning could not prevent us going．Set off very early，we went along an extreme narrow road，all in high spirits．On every side of the road was green fields and some farm houses．We could hear the sound of the rain and our footsteps mixing with our laughter．At noon we reached the top of the mountain．Thatsurprised us most there was the beauty of scenes．After having∧short rest there and sharing with the food we had brought，we started going down．It rained even harder．We were wet to the skin，andwe still sang and laughed happily．
詳解：
1：go改為went；考查動詞的時態(tài)，根據(jù)時間狀語Last weekend可知要用一般現(xiàn)在時．
2．set改為setting；考查分詞作狀語，主語we和動詞set是主謂關(guān)系，故用現(xiàn)在分詞形式作狀語．
3：extreme改為extremely；考查副詞，此處用副詞作狀語修飾形容詞narrow． 
4：every改為each/either；考查近義詞辨析，every三者或以上中的一個，each/either 指兩者中的一個，根據(jù)常識路有兩邊，故用each/either．
5：was改為were；考查主謂一致，主語green fields and some farm houses為復(fù)數(shù)，故動詞用復(fù)數(shù)形式were．
6：mixing改為mixed；考查分詞作賓語補足語，此處mixed是形容詞形式，作為補足語對賓語the sound of the rain and our footsteps 加以補充說明．
7：That改為What；考查名詞性從句，這是一個主語從句，疑問代詞what在從句中作主語，that在從句中不能做成分．
8：having 后加a；考查冠詞，have a rest 是固定搭配，意為"休息一下，休息一會兒"．
9：去掉with；考查介詞，share是及物動詞，后面可直接加賓語，故把with去掉．
10：and改為but；考查連詞，根據(jù)句意"我們都濕透了，但我們都開心地唱著，笑著"可知要用but表示上下文的轉(zhuǎn)折．

點評 整體把握短文大意，弄清短文的基本時態(tài)，分析句子之間的結(jié)構(gòu)關(guān)系，結(jié)合上下文語境運用詞匯，語法等基礎(chǔ)知識找出文中的錯誤并加以修改．