Question

根據(jù)以下提示，結(jié)合事例，用英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)一篇短文。
Encouragement from a friend plays a very important role in motivating you to solve the problems you are facing. It helps you fight the difficulties and get out of an unfavorable situation you are stuck in.
注意：
（1）無(wú)須寫(xiě)標(biāo)題，文章開(kāi)頭已經(jīng)給出，不得照抄英語(yǔ)提示語(yǔ)；
（2）除詩(shī)歌外，文體不限；
（3）詞數(shù)為120左右。
Encouragements can serve as a ray of hope during difficult times.
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Answer 1

Encouragements can serve as a ray of hope during difficult times. The best ones to encourage a depressed soul are our friends.
It was 3 years ago when I just began to attend my high school. For the 1^st time I failed in an English exam where I had thought I could have done a better job, leaving me depressed. My best friend, Lily, tried every means to comfort me, offering her emotional support. She listened to me carefully and told me that Edison succeeded in inventing the 1^st electrical bulb after failing more than 300 times. Eventually, with her patient encouragement, I overcame my depress and was determined to try hard again. The next exam witnessed my great progress.
Encouragement is the best means to rid us of negative feelings. It can equip and motivate us to fight difficulties we may meet with in our life.

試題分析：題目要求根據(jù)所給的英文材料寫(xiě)一篇短文。寫(xiě)作時(shí)，不得照抄所給材料，不能寫(xiě)成詩(shī)歌。材料大意是：朋友的鼓勵(lì)能幫助你解決正面臨的問(wèn)題。幫助你對(duì)抗困難，脫離困境。作文要突出“鼓勵(lì)”的重要作用。可以通過(guò)具體事例來(lái)體現(xiàn)出鼓勵(lì)的作用，最后用一句話總結(jié)一下鼓勵(lì)的好處。
【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】范文使用了短語(yǔ)serve as, listened to, more than, rid us of等，充實(shí)了作文內(nèi)容，使文章顯得具體，有說(shuō)服力；范文使用了一些語(yǔ)法知識(shí)：定語(yǔ)從句when I just began to attend my high school; where I had thought I could have done a better job和we may meet with in our life；非謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞leaving me depressed; offering her emotional support；賓語(yǔ)從句told me that Edison succeeded in inventing；固定搭配was determined to等，語(yǔ)法知識(shí)的熟練運(yùn)用給作文增色很多；范文還用Eventually來(lái)銜接前后句，做到了銜接緊湊。