Question

根據(jù)以下提示，結(jié)合事例，用英語寫一篇短文。
Encouragement from a friend plays a very important role in motivating you to solve the problems you are facing. It helps you fight the difficulties and get out of an unfavorable situation you are stuck in.
注意：
（1）無須寫標(biāo)題，文章開頭已經(jīng)給出，不得照抄英語提示語；
（2）除詩歌外，文體不限；
（3）詞數(shù)為120左右。
Encouragements can serve as a ray of hope during difficult times.
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Answer 1

Encouragements can serve as a ray of hope during difficult times. The best ones to encourage a depressed soul are our friends.
It was 3 years ago when I just began to attend my high school. For the 1^st time I failed in an English exam where I had thought I could have done a better job, leaving me depressed. My best friend, Lily, tried every means to comfort me, offering her emotional support. She listened to me carefully and told me that Edison succeeded in inventing the 1^st electrical bulb after failing more than 300 times. Eventually, with her patient encouragement, I overcame my depress and was determined to try hard again. The next exam witnessed my great progress.
Encouragement is the best means to rid us of negative feelings. It can equip and motivate us to fight difficulties we may meet with in our life.

試題分析：題目要求根據(jù)所給的英文材料寫一篇短文。寫作時，不得照抄所給材料，不能寫成詩歌。材料大意是：朋友的鼓勵能幫助你解決正面臨的問題。幫助你對抗困難，脫離困境。作文要突出“鼓勵”的重要作用。可以通過具體事例來體現(xiàn)出鼓勵的作用，最后用一句話總結(jié)一下鼓勵的好處。
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