Question

【題目】假定你是李華, 進入高中已近一個學(xué)期, 感悟頗多。請你寫一封信給你的美國筆友John, 向他介紹你的學(xué)習(xí)生活情況。內(nèi)容包括:

1. 學(xué)校環(huán)境;

2. 人際交往;

3. 學(xué)習(xí)生活。

注意:

1. 詞數(shù)100詞左右;

2. 可適當(dāng)增加細節(jié), 以使行文連貫;

Dear John,

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Yours,

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】Dear John,

How is everything going? It’s been almost a term since I entered Senior High School. I’ve got so much to share with you.

Located in the center of our city, our school is a key school with a history of 70 years. Equipped with all kinds of facilities, our school is beautiful as well as modern. What attracts me most is the library, where I can get access to various resources. I’ve made quite a few friends here. In class, we’re encouraged to share our opinions with group members and to solve problems by ourselves. I do enjoy it.

How about your school life? Looking forward to your reply.

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】試題分析：本文是一封書信。進入高中已近一個學(xué)期, 感悟頗多。請你寫一封信給你的美國筆友John, 向他介紹你的學(xué)習(xí)生活情況。內(nèi)容包括:學(xué)校環(huán)境；人際交往；學(xué)習(xí)生活。認真閱讀前面的提示，根據(jù)所給要點，并以此為基礎(chǔ)充分發(fā)揮自己的想象力，靈活運用英語知識，采用不同的表達方式將各要點完整地表述出來。寫作時注意時態(tài)、語態(tài)的合理運用，同時應(yīng)選用合適的連接詞或過渡詞，適當(dāng)增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫。

【亮點說明】

本文是一封書信，格式正確，結(jié)構(gòu)嚴(yán)謹，語句精煉，文章布局合理，文中使用高級詞匯和句子。It’s been almost a term since I entered Senior High School句中使用固定句式；Located in the center of our city, our school is a key school with a history of 70 years.過去分詞做伴隨狀態(tài)；Equipped with all kinds of facilities, our school is beautiful as well as modern.過去分詞做原因狀語；What attracts me most is the library, where I can get access to various resources.句中what引導(dǎo)的主語從句和where引導(dǎo)的定語從句完美結(jié)合；I do enjoy it.強調(diào)謂語使用巧妙。