Question

10．假定你是李華，想邀請(qǐng)外教Henry一起參觀中國(guó)剪紙（paper-cutting）藝術(shù)展．請(qǐng)給他寫(xiě)封郵件，內(nèi)容包括：
1．展覽時(shí)間、地點(diǎn)；
2．展覽內(nèi)容．
注意：
1．詞數(shù)100左右；
2．可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫．
Dear Henry，
I'm very delighted to write a letter to tell you something about Chinese paper-cutting exhibition，which will start on June 20 in our school lecture hall and last for a week．（高分句型一）（展覽時(shí)間、地點(diǎn)）As is well-known to us all，Chinese paper-cutting is famous all over the world and I'm sure you will be interested in it，so I plan to invite you to pay a close visit．（高分句型二）The exhibition is a collection of works created by some famous paper-cutting artists in China．（展覽內(nèi)容）During the activity，I will show you around our school and this is a good chance for you to enjoy yourself and learn more about Chinese traditional culture．
Would you please have a look at the exhibition with me？I'd appreciate it if you could accept my invitation．（高分句型三） I'm looking forward to receiving your reply as soon as possible．（殷切希望）
Yours，
Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 本篇書(shū)面表達(dá)屬于英文書(shū)信，是很常見(jiàn)的考查寫(xiě)作能力的形式，寫(xiě)作難度不大．根據(jù)提示信息要求給外教Henry寫(xiě)信，邀請(qǐng)他參觀中國(guó)剪紙藝術(shù)展．寫(xiě)作時(shí)注意以下幾點(diǎn)：首先需要注意信件的寫(xiě)作格式規(guī)范，注意抬頭和信尾的署名；其次要注意不能遺漏信件的要點(diǎn)．信中明確兩個(gè)要點(diǎn)：1．展覽的時(shí)間和地點(diǎn)；2．展覽的內(nèi)容．第三，寫(xiě)作時(shí)根據(jù)要表達(dá)的內(nèi)容確定句子的時(shí)態(tài)、語(yǔ)態(tài)；就本文而言應(yīng)該用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)和一般將來(lái)時(shí)兩種時(shí)態(tài)．最后，注意盡量避免使用沒(méi)有把握的單詞和句子，保持字跡工整、卷面整潔．
【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，層次分明，而且使用了多種表達(dá)：be delighted to do很高興去做某事；As is well-known to us all眾所周知；be interested in對(duì)…感興趣；plan to do計(jì)劃做某事；show sb around領(lǐng)著某人參觀；enjoy yourself過(guò)得愉快；look forward to盼望
I'm very delighted to write a letter to tell you something about Chinese paper-cutting exhibition，which will start on June 20 in our school lecture hall and last for a week．（高分句型一）
As is well-known to us all，Chinese paper-cutting is famous all over the world and I'm sure you will be interested in it，so I plan to invite you to pay a close visit．（高分句型二）
I'd appreciate it if you could accept my invitation．（高分句型三）

解答 Dear Henry，
      I'm very delighted to write a letter to tell you something about Chinese paper-cutting exhibition，which will start on June 20 in our school lecture hall and last for a week．（高分句型一）（展覽時(shí)間、地點(diǎn)）As is well-known to us all，Chinese paper-cutting is famous all over the world and I'm sure you will be interested in it，so I plan to invite you to pay a close visit．（高分句型二）The exhibition is a collection of works created by some famous paper-cutting artists in China．（展覽內(nèi)容）During the activity，I will show you around our school and this is a good chance for you to enjoy yourself and learn more about Chinese traditional culture．
      Would you please have a look at the exhibition with me？I'd appreciate it if you could accept my invitation．（高分句型三） I'm looking forward to receiving your reply as soon as possible．（殷切希望）
                                                                                                                                                                                                                                         Yours，
                                                                                                                                                                                                                                        Li Hua

點(diǎn)評(píng) 提綱類在寫(xiě)作時(shí)要注意內(nèi)容是否包含了所有要點(diǎn)，寫(xiě)作時(shí)注意準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關(guān)系，盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，同時(shí)也要注意高級(jí)詞匯和高級(jí)句型使文章顯得更有檔次，平時(shí)需要積累短語(yǔ)和重要句型．