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4．最近我校對(duì)高一學(xué)生入學(xué)一學(xué)期后的學(xué)習(xí)生活適應(yīng)情況做了一個(gè)調(diào)查，情況如下．請(qǐng)你用英語(yǔ)表達(dá)下表的調(diào)查結(jié)果，并提出個(gè)人觀點(diǎn)．
要求：1．詞數(shù)120左右；    2．文章開頭已給出，但不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)．
參考詞匯：course 課程；benefit對(duì)…有益；stressful 有壓力的

60%左右的學(xué)生認(rèn)為	40%左右的學(xué)生認(rèn)為	我的觀點(diǎn)
1．高中學(xué)習(xí)很有壓力； 2．科目難度大，課后作業(yè)多； 3．沒時(shí)間參加鍛煉等活動(dòng)	1．適應(yīng)并喜歡高中生活； 2．課程更有趣，活動(dòng)更豐富，受益匪淺．	…

Recently，a survey has been carried out in our school whether the freshmen have become used to the life in senior high school．

Answer 1

分析 寫好圖表式作文的關(guān)鍵是認(rèn)真審題和分析所給的提綱，寫作首要分析用什么時(shí)態(tài)．本文要求寫一個(gè)高一學(xué)生的學(xué)習(xí)生活適應(yīng)情況調(diào)查，通常用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)．有2個(gè)觀點(diǎn)，用they做主語(yǔ)，和自己的看法用I做主語(yǔ)．注意用一些高級(jí)詞匯和短語(yǔ)和以及較復(fù)雜的句式．開頭的變化和句子的連貫性也很重要．最后還要注意字?jǐn)?shù)的控制．
本文分三段寫出了高一學(xué)生的學(xué)習(xí)生活適應(yīng)情況調(diào)查．文中用了Firstly，Besides列出2條原因．接下來(lái)，用On the contrary，開頭，提出另一個(gè)觀點(diǎn)．As far as I'm concerned，提出個(gè)人觀點(diǎn)．
亮點(diǎn)句型一：Recently a survey has been carried out in our school whether the freshmen have become used to the life in senior high school．最近我們學(xué)校進(jìn)行了一項(xiàng)調(diào)查，是否新生已經(jīng)習(xí)慣了高中生活．這是一個(gè)同位語(yǔ)從句，要解釋說(shuō)明的名詞是survey，句子whether the freshmen have become used to the life in senior high school是調(diào)查的內(nèi)容．
亮點(diǎn)句型二：The reason is that they find the courses are more interesting and the activities are more colorful，which surely benefit them a lot．原因是他們覺得課程更有趣，活動(dòng)更豐富多彩，這肯定會(huì)使他們受益很多．這是一個(gè)包括表語(yǔ)從句和非限制性定語(yǔ)從句的復(fù)雜句，其中 that they find the courses are more interesting and the activities are more colorful是一個(gè)表語(yǔ)從句；which surely benefit them a lot是一個(gè)非限制性定語(yǔ)從句，which指代前邊整個(gè)主句的意思．

解答 Recently a survey has been carried out in our school whether the freshmen have become used to the life in senior high school．（亮點(diǎn)句型一）
As can be seen from result of the survey，opinions are divided．About 60% students in Senior 1 hold the opinion that life in senior high school is far from relaxing．The reasons are as follows．Firstly，the subjects they are learning now are obviously more difficult．Besides，they have to do endless homework，which leaves them little time for exercise and other activities．【一些學(xué)生的觀點(diǎn)】
On the contrary，others say that they have become used to the new life and have begun to enjoy it．The reason is that they find the courses are more interesting and the activities are more colorful，which surely benefit them a lot．（亮點(diǎn)句型二）【另一些學(xué)生的觀點(diǎn)】

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