【題目】假定英語(yǔ)課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請(qǐng)你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中共有10處語(yǔ)言錯(cuò)誤，每句中最多有兩處。錯(cuò)誤涉及一個(gè)單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

增加：在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏詞符號(hào)（），并在其下面寫出該加的詞。

刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（\）劃掉。

修改：在錯(cuò)的詞下劃一橫線（ ），并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。

注意：1.每處錯(cuò)誤及修改均僅限一詞;

2.只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計(jì)分。

Having drank too much, Alfred was driving along the country road at top speed while his car ran into an old man who was walking across the road. After looking around and thinking there was not a single person see the accident, he drives off without taking the old man to the hospital. The old man was frightening but kept the car number on his mind. About one month late, they went to court. Alfred’s lawyer said:” Alfred is experienced driver of more than 20 years.” “ If experience can prove that, here, you see, the old man had walked safe for over 60 years,” the old man’s lawyer replied.

【答案】

【1】drank – drunk

【2】while改為when

【3】see 改為seeing

【4】drives改為drove

【5】frightening改為frightened

【6】on改為in

【7】late改為later

【8】is experienced中間添加 an

【9】had- has

【10】safe- safely

【解析】

【1】喝酒這么多，Alfred開車沿著鄉(xiāng)村小路高速的行駛。這里使用現(xiàn)在分詞的完成式，所以用drank – drunk。

【2】這時(shí)他的汽車撞上了過(guò)馬路的老人。這里使用while引導(dǎo)時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)從句，when引導(dǎo)時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)從句，表示時(shí)間點(diǎn)。

【3】在四處看過(guò)了以后，認(rèn)為周圍沒有一個(gè)人看見，there be句型，后面是現(xiàn)在分詞做定語(yǔ):see 改為 seeing。

【4】他沒有將老人送到醫(yī)院就將車開走了。這篇文章使用一般過(guò)去式：drives 改為drove。

【5】老人很害怕，但是將號(hào)碼記住了。這里使用形容詞frightening“令人害怕的”，frightened“害怕的”。

【6】考查詞組：keep sb. in his hand“將…記在心里”：on 改為in。

【7】大約一個(gè)月后，所以用later。late 改為 later。

【8】Alfred 是一個(gè)有20年經(jīng)驗(yàn)的司機(jī)。driver是可數(shù)名詞，is experienced 中間添加 an。

【9】這個(gè)老人已經(jīng)安全地走了60年了。這里使用現(xiàn)在完成時(shí)：had- has。

【10】這里使用副詞safely修飾walk，safe- safely。

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