Question

【題目】書面表達:

假定你是李華，最近你就高中生對網(wǎng)絡(luò)使用的情況進行了調(diào)查并寫一篇報道。請根據(jù)下面的要點提示對你的調(diào)查作簡要介紹，發(fā)給報社。

要點提示：1.主要用途；

2.出現(xiàn)的問題；

注意：1、詞數(shù)：100字左右；

2、可適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫；

3、文章開頭已給出，不計入字數(shù)。

As we all know, the Internet is playing an important part in our daily life. Recently, I did a survey about how the students in my school make use of the Internet.

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Answer 1

【答案】

As we all know, the Internet is playing an important part in our daily life. Recently, I did a survey about how the students in my school make use of the Internet.

The students mostly use the Internet for three major purposes, among which seeking information is the most popular. They also use the Internet for communication and entertainment, such as sending and receiving e-mails, enjoying music and movies and playing on-line games. Besides, doing on-line shopping is gradually becoming part of their life.

However, I have also noticed that the Internet brings about problems to the students at the same time. Some students spend too much time playing on-line games. Worse still, unhealthy information on the Internet does great harm to students who get access to out of curiosity.

Thus, we can see students do need proper guidance on how to make good use of the Internet.

【解析】

試題分析：假定你是李華，最近你就高中生對網(wǎng)絡(luò)使用的情況進行了調(diào)查并寫一篇報道。請根據(jù)下面的要點提示對你的調(diào)查作簡要介紹，發(fā)給報社。要點提示：1.主要用途；2.出現(xiàn)的問題。

寫作時不要逐句翻譯，可適當增加細節(jié)以使行文連貫同時要把所提示的點寫全，語句通順，同時要注意準確運用時態(tài)、語態(tài)、上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關(guān)系。根據(jù)句意適當使用并列連詞，同時也要合理運用高級詞匯和高級句子為文章增色添彩。注意：1、詞數(shù)：100字左右；2、可適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫；3、文章開頭已給出，不計入字數(shù)。

【亮點說明】The students mostly use the Internet for three major purposes, among which seeking information is the most popular.句中使用非限制性定語從句；Besides, doing on-line shopping is gradually becoming part of their life.動名詞短語作主語；However, I have also noticed that the Internet brings about problems to the students at the same time.句中運用賓語從句；Some students spend too much time playing on-line games.動名詞短語作賓語；unhealthy information on the Internet does great harm to students who get access to out of curiosity. 句中再次出現(xiàn)定語從句；Thus, we can see students do need proper guidance on how to make good use of the Internet.疑問詞加動詞不定式做介詞賓語；另外，Besides, However, at the same time、Worse still, Thus,在句中的運用為文章增光添彩。