Question

17．假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請你修改你同桌寫的以下作文．文中共有10處語言錯誤，每句中最多有兩處．每處錯誤僅涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改．
增加：在缺詞處加一個漏字符號（Λ），并在其下面寫出該加的詞．
刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（\）劃掉．
修改：在錯的詞下畫一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞．
注意：1．每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞．2．只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計分．
One day a girl found a dead rat in front of her door．This kind of thing happens a lot of in the city during winter，but she didn't pay much attention to it．However，the next day it was a dead bird on the doorstep of her house．He thought it was just some jokes playing by those naughty kids．But the same thing happened for a week!She started to get angrily．So she sets up a hidden camera on the door，tried to find out the truth，which really gave her big surprise．The criminal was a cat!It left those dead body in front of her house every day at midnight．

Answer 1

分析 短文主要描述一個女孩發(fā)現(xiàn)她家門口總有一些死老鼠和死鳥，后來通過發(fā)現(xiàn)，原來是只貓所為．

解答 第一節(jié)  短文改錯
One day a girl found a dead rat in front of her door．This kind of thing happens a lot of in the city
during winter，but she didn't pay much attention to it．However，the next dayit was a dead bird 
                       so                                                                                     there
on the doorstep of her house．He thought it was just some jokes playing by those naughty kids．But 
                                             She                                             played
the same thing happened for a week!She started to get angrily．So she sets up a hidden camera on
                                                                                angry               set
the door，tried to find out the truth，which really gave herΛbig surprise．The criminal was a cat!
              trying                                                               a
It left those dead body in front of her house every day at midnight．
                         bodies
1．of去掉，考查固定搭配，a lot of"很多"，用來修飾可數(shù)名詞復數(shù)和不可數(shù)名詞，a lot用來修飾動詞，此處用來修飾動詞happens，因此去掉of．
2．but改為so，考查連詞，前后關系為因果關系，不是轉(zhuǎn)折．
3．it改為there，考查固定句型，此處指"有一只死鳥在她家的門口"，因此使用there be句型，表示"有"．
4．He改為She，考查人稱代詞，人稱代詞用錯，前文指的是女孩，因此使用主格的She．
5．playing改為played，考查非謂語動詞，此處非謂語動詞play與其邏輯主語jokes構(gòu)成被動的關系，因此使用過去分詞充當后置定語，因此playing改為played．
6．a(chǎn)ngrily改為angry，考查形容詞，表示"變得…"使用系動詞get后加形容詞，因此使用angry．
7．sets改為set，考查動詞的時態(tài)，短文描述的是過去的動作，因此使用一般過去時，set的過去式是set．
8．tried改為trying，考查非謂語形式，此處非謂語動詞try與其邏輯主語she構(gòu)成主動的關系，因此使用現(xiàn)在分詞短語trying充當伴隨狀語．
9．her后加a，考查冠詞，此處surprise是可數(shù)名詞，因此前使用不定冠詞a．
10．body改為bodies，考查名詞的復數(shù)，those修飾可數(shù)名詞復數(shù)，因此body應使用復數(shù)形式．

點評 短文改錯要具備兩個基礎，一是懂得分析句子結(jié)構(gòu)，二是知道充當各個句子成分的詞類或詞性．并且注意人稱代詞，從句的引導詞，名詞單復數(shù)，和全文時態(tài)的理解，對于一些固定搭配，平時的學習中要多注意積累．