Question

14．文中共有10處語言錯誤，每句中最多有兩處，每處錯誤僅涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改．
刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（\）劃掉．
增加：在缺詞處加一個漏字符號（/\），在其下面寫出該加的詞．
修改：在錯的詞下畫一橫線，在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞．
注意：1．每處錯誤及其修改均限一詞；
  2．只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計分．
    Last weekend I visited my best friend in London，which was supposed to be excited．Melina，whom I have not seen her for three years，offered to take me on a sighting tour by car．Unlucky，she ended up doing everything but that!First，she showed me around the building where she had gotten her first job．Then she drove me to café where she had met her first boyfriend．Before I could say everything，she smiled at me and said she wanted to take me to another place where was special to her．I was very disappointed when we got on the place where she had bought her car!Besides，she kept talk about herself all day long!I was fed up with it，so I couldn't make her stop．When she finally decides to call it a day，she turned around and found me asleep!

Answer 1

分析 作者在本文講述了上周去倫敦看望朋友Melina的經歷，這本應該是讓人很興奮的事情，但是Melina滔滔不絕地講述她的每一件事情，這令作者很厭煩．

解答 Last weekend I visited my best friend in London，which was supposed to be excited．Melina，whom I have not seen her for three years，offered to take me on a sighting tour by car．Unlucky，she ended up doing everything but that!First，she showed me around the building where she had gotten her first job．Then she drove me to∧café where she had met her first boyfriend．Before I could say everything，she smiled at me and said she wanted to take me to another place where was special to her．I was very disappointed when we got on the place where she had bought her car!Besides，she kept talk about herself all day long!I was fed up with it，so I couldn't make her stop．When she finally decides to call it a day，she turned around and found me asleep!
詳解：
1．excited改為exciting；考查分詞作形容詞，現在分詞作形容詞修飾物，過去分詞作形容詞修飾人，這里主語which指代上句提到的事情，故用現在分詞形式．
2．have改為had；考查動詞的時態(tài)，本文基本時態(tài)用了一般過去時，此處的動作發(fā)生在過去的過去，故用過去完成時，把have改為had．
3．Unlucky改為Unluckily；考查副詞，這里用副詞作狀語修飾整個句子．
4．to后面加the；考查定冠詞，此處cafe有定語從句where she had met her first boyfriend限制，故前面加the表示特指．
5．everything改為anything；考查不定代詞，everything意為"每件事"，anything意為"任何事，任何事物"，結合句意可知此處應該用anything．
6．where改為which/that；考查定語從句，關系代詞which/that指代 another place 在定語從句中作主語．
7．on改為to；考查介詞，go to someplace 是固定搭配，意為"去某個地方"．
8．talk改為talking；考查非謂語動詞，keep doing 是固定搭配，意為"一直持續(xù)做某事"．
9．so改為but；考查連詞，結合語境分析句意為"我很厭倦，但我不能使她停下來"，所以上下文為轉折關系，故用but．
10．decides改為decided；考查動詞的時態(tài)，此處動作發(fā)生在過去，故用一般過去時decided．

點評 短文改錯時要注意一下幾點：1．快速閱讀，整體把握短文大意．2．重視語境以及上下文的關系．3．充分運用基礎語言知識找出錯誤所在．