Question

6．假如你是李華，你的美國筆友David想了解你高中第一學(xué)年的情況．請根據(jù)下列所提示的信息給他寫一封回信．
1．感嘆時間過得快；
2．學(xué)習(xí)上的得與失；
3．學(xué)校生活：交友，課外活動等．
注意：
1.100字左右；信的開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總數(shù)．
2．可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫．
Dear David，
                                     
What about your school life？Would you like to share it with me？I'm looking forward to your reply．
Yours
Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 高分句型一：
 I study very hard here and have learned much new knowledge，which makes me very happy
高分句型二：
 In this school，I have made so many new friends that I never feel lonely
句型一 which makes me very happy 該句是一個由which引導(dǎo)的非限制性定語從句，which在定語從句中作主語
句型二  I have made so many new friends that I never feel lonely 該句中有一個由that引導(dǎo)的結(jié)果狀語從句
此外，該文章中還有以下高級詞匯和重要短語：share sth with sb          take part in     make progress in

解答 Dear David，
   How time flies!It is almost one year since I studied in senior high school．I'm glad to share with you my experience in the new school．（表明寫作意圖）
   I study very hard here and have learned much new knowledge，which makes me very happy．（高分句型一）Most excitingly，I've made great progress in English．But I am not good at physics and I'll have to work harder in the next term．
   In this school，I have made so many new friends that I never feel lonely．（高分句型二）After class，I often discuss difficult problems and even share my happiness and sorrow with them．In my spare time，I often take part in different kinds of after-school activities，especially ball games．Therefore，I've grown taller and stronger．（描述學(xué)校生活）
   What about your school life？Would you like to share it with me？I'm looking forward to your reply．
   Yours
   Li Hua

點(diǎn)評 該書面表達(dá)為提綱類，該類作文一般規(guī)定了考生的寫作思路，羅列出了相應(yīng)的寫作要點(diǎn)．考生在平時應(yīng)注意積累相應(yīng)的詞匯和短語，在寫作時盡量做到將要點(diǎn)與主題緊密結(jié)合，用準(zhǔn)確的、簡潔明了的語言將作文展示出來．