【題目】短文改錯(cuò)

假定英語(yǔ)課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請(qǐng)你修改你同桌寫的以下短文。短文中共有10處錯(cuò)誤，每句中最多有兩處。錯(cuò)誤涉及一個(gè)單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

增加：在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏字符號(hào)（八），并在此符號(hào)下面寫出該加的詞。

刪除：把多余的詞用斜線(＼)劃掉。

修改：在錯(cuò)的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。

注意：1.每處錯(cuò)誤及其修改均僅限一詞；

2．只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計(jì)分。

Victor was traveling through a train for his parents. All the time he is glancing with joy at his new shoes what his father had bought for him. After some time, he removed his shoes to take him a nap.

After waking up, he found one of her shoes missing. He started crying unhappy. His parents tried to comfort him. His father told him it was no use cry and promised that after reaching home, he would buy him a new pair of shoes.

Victor got very excited on hearing his father's words that he threw other shoe out of the train.

Reaching the destination, he suddenly found his losing shoe in a basket. How he regretted it!

【答案】

【1】for改成with

【2】is改成was

【3】what改為that/which

【4】去掉him

【5】her改為his

【6】unhappy改為unhappily

【7】cry改為crying

【8】very改為so

【9】other前加the

【10】losing改為lost

【解析】

【1】for改成with 考察介詞。With表示“和.......”，文意是Victor和他的父母通過一輛火車旅行。

【2】is改成was 考察時(shí)態(tài)。文章時(shí)態(tài)是過去式，前后時(shí)態(tài)要保持一致，所以is改成was。文意是一路上他一直高興的看著爸爸給他買的新鞋。

【3】what改為that/which 考察引導(dǎo)詞。that/which引導(dǎo)的定語(yǔ)從句修飾名詞shoes。

【4】去掉him考察人稱代詞。 take a nap是固定搭配，表示“小憩”的意思。文意是偶爾他會(huì)把腳移開休息一下。

【5】her改為his考察人稱代詞。人稱代詞使用錯(cuò)誤。文意是當(dāng)他醒來的時(shí)候，他發(fā)現(xiàn)一只鞋不見了。

【6】unhappy改為unhappily考察副詞。unhappy是形容詞，表示“高興的”，而unhappily是副詞文意是他很不高興的哭了。cry是動(dòng)詞，所以要用副詞修飾。

【7】cry改為crying考察動(dòng)名詞。it was no use doing.....表示“做某事是無(wú)用的”，文意是他的父親告訴他哭是沒用的，并承諾他回到家之后在給他買一雙新鞋。

【8】very改為so考察連詞。文意是他聽到父親的話以后非常興奮。very是副詞，不能修飾形容詞。

【9】other前加the 考察冠詞。The表示“特指”，文章中特指另外一只鞋子。文意是他把另外一只鞋子也扔出了火車。

【10】losing改為lost考察形容詞。文意是到達(dá)目的地后，他發(fā)現(xiàn)丟失的那只鞋子在一個(gè)籃子里面，多么遺憾啊。

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