Question

【題目】短文改錯(cuò)

假定英語(yǔ)課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請(qǐng)你修改你同桌寫(xiě)的以下作文。文中共有10處語(yǔ)言錯(cuò)誤，每句中最多有兩處。每處錯(cuò)誤僅涉及一個(gè)單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

增加:在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏字符號(hào)(∧)，并在其下面寫(xiě)出該加的詞。

刪除:把多余的詞用斜線(\)劃掉。

修改:在錯(cuò)的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫(xiě)出修改后的詞。

注意:1.每處錯(cuò)誤及其修改均僅限一詞;

2.只允許修改10處，多者(從第11處起)不計(jì)分。

Yesterday, I saw the old lady fall down when I was hurrying to school. I was about to help her up while suddenly a passer-by stop me, saying that I might be accused of knocking her down. Heard his words, I began to hesitate and slow down my steps. At the same time, another student, that saw everything, went up to help. The old lady said nothing but lots of thank to the good boy. I felt ashamed.

As is known to all, help others is forever a good virtue. Even though some old people are becoming immorally, we can’t let it to disappear. I have made my mind that I will reach out my hand without hesitation next time.

Answer 1

【答案】

【1】the--an

【2】while --when

【3】stop--stopped

【4】Heard—Hearing

【5】that --who

【6】thank—thanks

【7】help--helping

【8】immorally--immoral

【9】刪掉to

【10】made后面加up

【解析】

試題分析：文章講述作者在匆忙上學(xué)的路上看見(jiàn)一個(gè)老太太跌倒，想幫忙卻被過(guò)路人勸住了，但是另外一名學(xué)生上去幫忙，他感到很羞愧，決心下次一定要伸出手。

【1】the--an 昨天我在匆忙上學(xué)的路上看見(jiàn)一個(gè)老太太跌倒。這里是泛指“一個(gè)老太太”，the改成 an

【2】while –when 我剛要把她扶起來(lái)，這時(shí)一個(gè)過(guò)路人攔住了我。這里使用了：be about to do…when…，剛要做…這時(shí)…，while 改成when

【3】stop—stopped 因?yàn)橹v述的是昨天的事情，所以用一般過(guò)去式：stop改成stopped

【4】Heard—Hearing 聽(tīng)到這個(gè)話，我開(kāi)始猶豫，放慢步伐。這里用現(xiàn)在分詞做狀語(yǔ)：Heard改成 Hearing

【5】that –who 同時(shí)，看見(jiàn)一切發(fā)生的另外一名學(xué)生上去幫忙。這里是非限制性定語(yǔ)從句，不能用that 改成who

【6】thank—thanks 老太太除了感謝這個(gè)男孩，什么也沒(méi)有說(shuō)。我感到很羞愧。Thank一般用復(fù)數(shù)，改成thanks

【7】help—helping 幫助別人永遠(yuǎn)是美德。這里是動(dòng)名詞做主語(yǔ)：help改成 helping

【8】immorally—immoral 即使一些老人不道德；用形容詞做表語(yǔ)：immorally改成 immoral

【9】刪掉to 我們不能讓它消失。Let sb do sth，用省略to的不定式。去掉to

【10】made后面加up 我下定決心下次要毫不猶豫的伸出手。Made up one’s mind“下定決心”

【名師點(diǎn)撥】

動(dòng)詞不定式作賓語(yǔ)補(bǔ)足語(yǔ)

1. 帶to的動(dòng)詞不定式作賓語(yǔ)補(bǔ)足語(yǔ)

encourage sb. to do sth.鼓勵(lì)某人做某事；want sb. to do 想讓某人做某事；invite sb. to do邀請(qǐng)某人做某事； ask sb. to do 請(qǐng)求某人做某事；order sb. to do命令某人做某事； tell sb. to do告訴某人做某事；force sb. to do 強(qiáng)迫某人做某事；allow sb. to do允許某人做某事； forbid sb. to do 禁止某人做某事；persuade sb. to do 勸說(shuō)某人做某事。

2.不帶to 的動(dòng)詞不定式作賓語(yǔ)補(bǔ)足語(yǔ)

have/make/see/watch/hear/let/notice/observe/feel/look at/listen to sb. do sth.

注意：help sb. (to) do sth.

溫馨提示：不帶to 的動(dòng)詞不定式作賓語(yǔ)補(bǔ)足語(yǔ)，但是變成被動(dòng)語(yǔ)態(tài)時(shí)要把to加上。He made me feel at home. （主動(dòng)語(yǔ)態(tài)）I was made to feel at home.（被動(dòng)語(yǔ)態(tài)）