Question

書面表達（滿分25分）

假定你是我校的高三學生李華， 學校將要為高一新生舉辦主題為“What to learn in senior high school?”的英語沙龍活動， 特邀請你結(jié)合自身經(jīng)歷談談自己的體會。請根據(jù)以下提綱準備一份英語發(fā)言稿。詞數(shù)120左右；發(fā)言稿開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。

1．學會學習：方法、習慣等；

2．學會做人：真誠、友善等；

3．其他方面：考生自擬。

Good morning, everyone! It is my honor to be here to share with you my opinion on what to learn in senior high school．

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Thank you!

Answer 1

Good morning， everyone! It is my honor to be here to share with you my opinions on what to learn in senior high school．

In the coming three years, our school life will be changing．Firstly, we should learn to learn efficiently．Personally, I used to try effective methods to achieve my academic goals．Developing a good habit is also of importance．It really benefited me a lot to preview lessons, get actively involved in class, and review what had been taught after class．

In addition, we should learn how to get along well with others．In school, I respected teachers and was friendly with classmates．It was with sincerity and faithfulness that we created a harmonious atmosphere．

Finally, we should take part in sports and outdoor activities frequently．They were really helpful to build up my body and enrich my school life．

【解析】

試題分析：這是一篇發(fā)言稿。本文所給材料較詳細，我們要做的就是用正確的英語把這些內(nèi)容表達出來。認真閱讀材料，不可遺漏要點，并適當發(fā)揮。根據(jù)材料內(nèi)容可知本文主要是一般過去時態(tài)，主語是第一人稱，注意時態(tài)語時間狀語的搭配及主謂一致問題。寫作中適當使用連詞，注意上下文聯(lián)系緊密，符合邏輯關(guān)系。

【亮點說明】

這篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短語，為文章增色不少.如: share with you my opinions on和你們分享我的意見, I used to try effective methods to achieve my academic goals我想用有效的方法去實現(xiàn)我的目標get along well with與…相處的好, build up my body and enrich my school life鍛煉身體，豐富了我的學校生活等,學習中注意總結(jié),牢記一些固定句式及短語,寫作時就可以適當引用,使文章的表達更富有條理.

考點：提綱作文。