Question

【題目】假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。作文中共有10處錯誤，每句中最多有兩處。錯誤涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

增加：在缺詞處加一個漏詞符號（∧），并在其下面寫出該加的詞。

刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（\）劃掉。

修改：在錯的詞下畫一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。

注意： 1. 每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞；

2. 只允許修改 10 處，多者 （從第 11 處起 ）不計分。

With the development of the Internet, more and more children are addicted to play online games day and night. It does harm not only to their health, especial their eyes, but also to their studies. Comparing with online games, many traditional games benefits kids mentally and physically. They were very popular to several generations, for they learned something valuable and had a fun playing the games. Therefore, the games are losing our appeal now, and so me children even haven’t heard of them. Personally, I think teachers and parents should take measure to limit their children’s Internet time. Let children know harm of online games and the benefits of traditional games. What’s more, we should often organize some traditional activity for children.

Answer 1

【答案】1.play→playing

2.especial→especially

3.Comparing→Compared

4.benefits→benefit

5.to→with

6.had a fun刪去 a

7.Therefore→However

8.our→their

9.measure→ measures

10.know和 harm之間加the

【解析】1. 固定搭配：be addicted to sth./doing sth.沉迷于某事或做某事，故把play改為playing。

2. 句意：它不僅傷害了他們的身體，尤其是他們的眼睛，而且也傷害了他們的學習。副詞修飾詞組，故把especial改為especially。

3. 固定句式：compared with/to…與……相比較，把Comparing改為Compared，注意大寫開頭。

4. 句意：很多傳統(tǒng)的運動對孩子的身心健康是有益的。many traditional games是句子的主語，一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)，后面的謂語動詞用復數(shù)形式，故benefits改為benefit。

5. 固定詞組：be popular with在……中受歡迎，故把to改為with。

6. 固定搭配：have fun (in) doing sth.玩得開心，fun是不可數(shù)名詞，故刪去fun前的a。

7. 句意：然而，現(xiàn)在運動失去了對他們的吸引。前后是一種轉折關系，故把Therefore改為However。

8. 句意：然而，現(xiàn)在運動失去了對他們的吸引。故把our改為their。

9. 固定詞組：take measures采取措施，故把measure改為measures。

10. 句意：讓孩子們知道網上游戲的危害和傳統(tǒng)游戲的好處。此處表示特指，故在know和 harm之間加the。