Question

13．假設(shè)你是李華，你的美國朋友Tom上個月來到北京學(xué)習．七月份你將去北京參加暑
期中學(xué)生英語演講比賽，你在資料搜集、語言運用等方面遇到了困難．請根據(jù)以下要點給
Tom寫一封電子郵件：
1．詢問Tom的生活和學(xué)習情況；
2．談?wù)勀愕睦щy并請Tom幫忙；
3．告訴Tom你打算賽后去看他．

Answer 1

分析 這是一篇提綱類作文，由于是討論Tom現(xiàn)在的情況和自己的安排，所以應(yīng)該以一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)和一般將來時態(tài)為主，用第一人稱來敘述．主要分成三部分：一 詢問Tom的生活和學(xué)習情況；二 自己的困難并請求Tom幫忙；三 自己的打算．
高分句型：
1．It is reported that（引導(dǎo)主語從句） the weather there is very hot and dry these days，which（引導(dǎo)定語從句） is very different from that of your country
據(jù)說那里的天氣又熱又干燥，完全不同于你們國家的天氣．
2．I am glad to tell you that （引導(dǎo)賓語從句）I will go to Beijing to take part in an English speech contest in July，which（定語從句） is not only an honor，but also a great opportunity for me to improve myself
我非常高興的告訴你在七月份我要去北京參加一個英語演講比賽，這不僅是一份榮譽，而且是提高自我的一個機會．

解答 Dear Tom，
      How time flies!You have been studying in Beijing for nearly a month，during which you must have achieved a lot．Well，how's everything going？It is reported that the weather there is very hot and dry these days，which is very different from that of your country（高分句型一）．Have you adapted to it？In addition，you once complained that the food served there was not to you taste．I hope that should have been improved（詢問Tom的生活和學(xué)習情況）．
      I am glad to tell you that I will go to Beijing to take part in an English speech contest in July，which is not only an honor，but also a great opportunity for me to improve myself．（高分句型二） And now I try my best to make preparations for it．However，I have some trouble in collecting the materials relevant and using of the language．I will appreciate it if you give me a hand to solve the problems（自己的困難并請求Tom幫忙）．
      After the contest，I am to drop in at your school to visit you．Please waiting for my phone（自己的打算）．
                                                                                                                                                                                                           Yours，
                                                                                                                                                                                                           Li Hua

點評 英語寫作是一項主觀性較強的測試題．它不僅考查學(xué)生的寫作基礎(chǔ)而且還考查學(xué)生在寫作過程中綜合運用語言的能力．在撰寫時要注意主謂語一致，時態(tài)呼應(yīng)，用詞貼切等．要提高英語寫作水平，需要兩方面的訓(xùn)練：一是語言基礎(chǔ)方面的訓(xùn)練，要有扎實的造句、翻譯等基本功，即用詞法、句法等知識造出正確無誤的句子；二是寫作知識和能力 方面的訓(xùn)練以掌握寫作方面的基本方法和技巧．