Question

【題目】假設(shè)你叫John，你的同學(xué)Tom寫信向你請教如何養(yǎng)成良好的英語學(xué)習(xí)習(xí)慣。 請你結(jié)合自身學(xué)習(xí)實際，按以下提示，用英文寫一封建議信，要點如下：

1. 說明學(xué)習(xí)習(xí)慣與學(xué)習(xí)效果之間的關(guān)系；

2. 介紹一種好的學(xué)習(xí)習(xí)慣并提出養(yǎng)成該習(xí)慣的建議；

3. 描述同學(xué)們在學(xué)習(xí)習(xí)慣方面存在的問題并給出改進措施。

注意：詞數(shù)100左右，開頭語已為你寫好，不計入總詞數(shù)。

Dear Tom,

I am really glad to receive your letter asking for some advice on how to develop good learning habits in learning English.

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Yours.

John

Answer 1

【答案】Dear Tom,

I am really glad to receive your letter asking for some advice on how to develop good learning habits in learning English.

As we all know, good learning habits can make our study succeed. With good learning habits, we can get twice the result with half the effort. So we should pay more attention to our habits which we develop in our study.

I’m sure “repeat” is a good habit. We often say “repetition is the mother of memory.” If we want to learn English well, we need to repeat, repeat, and repeat. This is the only secret. How to develop the habit? First, set a timetable. Second, stick to the plan and don’t stop.

Some of my classmates are lazy and careless in learning English. I think it should be a good idea to repeat more and practice more, and think it over when we do our homework. I hope my advice will be of some help to you.

Best wishes

Yours

John

【解析】

本篇書面表達屬于應(yīng)用類作文，是一封信。

第1步：根據(jù)提示可知，假設(shè)你叫John，你的同學(xué)Tom寫信向你請教如何養(yǎng)成良好的英語學(xué)習(xí)習(xí)慣。 請你結(jié)合自身學(xué)習(xí)實際，按以下提示，用英文寫一封建議信。時態(tài)應(yīng)為一般現(xiàn)在時。

第2步：根據(jù)寫作要求，確定關(guān)鍵詞（組），如：as we all know眾所周知，learning habit學(xué)習(xí)習(xí)慣，succeed成功，effort努力，pay more attention to更加注意，repeat重復(fù)，stick to堅持，lazy懶惰， careless粗心的。

第3步：根據(jù)提示及關(guān)鍵詞（組）進行遣詞造句，注意主謂一致和時態(tài)問題。

第4步：連句成文，注意使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B詞進行句子之間的銜接與過渡，書寫一定要規(guī)范清晰，保持整潔美觀的卷面是非常重要的。

亮點說明：作者在范文中使用了較多高級表達方式，如：So we should pay more attention to our habits which we develop in our study.定語從句的運用；I think it should be a good idea to repeat more and practice more, and think it over when we do our homework.賓語從句的運用。本文內(nèi)容完整，語言規(guī)范，語篇連貫，詞數(shù)適當(dāng)。另外全文中沒有中國式英語的句式，顯示了很高的駕馭英語的能力。另外，文章思路清晰、層次分明，上下句轉(zhuǎn)換自然，為文章增色添彩。