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昨天，我們班級(jí)就雷鋒精神是否過時(shí)的話題展開了積極的討論，有的同學(xué)認(rèn)為雷鋒精神在現(xiàn)在的商品化社會(huì)已經(jīng)過時(shí)，人們應(yīng)該去追逐更加實(shí)際的一些東西比如金錢，名聲和舒適的生活。而大部分同學(xué)則持相反的觀點(diǎn)。他們認(rèn)為雷鋒精神仍然是現(xiàn)代人必需的品質(zhì)，這個(gè)偉大士兵的故事對(duì)各行各業(yè)的人產(chǎn)生影響，現(xiàn)實(shí)生活中就有許許多多的活雷鋒在全心全意地為別人服務(wù)。請(qǐng)你把討論的結(jié)果寫出來并談?wù)勀愕目捶ā?/p>

注意：（1）短文應(yīng)該包括以上所提供的主要信息，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮； （2）詞數(shù)：120左右

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【答案】

Yesterday, we held a discussion on whether the Spirit of LeiFeng was out of style. Opinions were divided into two.

A small number of the students think that Lei Feng’s spirit has gone out of style in today’s society. They reason that in commodity economy people should seek more practical things, such as fame, money and the comfortable life.

　　 However, the majority of the students claim that the spirit of Lei Feng still is still necessary.

The great soldier’s story has such a strong influence on people’s ideas, values and ways of          life that in every field of society there arise countless "Living Lei Fengs".

　　  In my opinion, the spirit of Lei Feng will never be out of date. Instead, it has been brought forward. Today more and more "Lei Fengs" are coming forth from various circles . The spirit of Lei Feng——an unselfish spirit will always encourage us to go forward.

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