Question

【題目】假設(shè)你是新華中學(xué)的李華同學(xué)。你們學(xué)校將要挑選一批學(xué)生赴美國(guó)交流學(xué)習(xí)，你覺得這是一很好的機(jī)會(huì)，希望能夠獲得這次機(jī)會(huì)。請(qǐng)寫一封自薦信，包括以下要點(diǎn)：

1. 個(gè)人的主要情況；

2. 英語水平；

3. 性格特點(diǎn)和興趣愛好；

4. 希望通過交流實(shí)現(xiàn)的目標(biāo)。

注意：1.文章開頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)；2. 字?jǐn)?shù)：100字左右

Dear Sir or Madam,

My name is Li Hua. __________________________________________________________

______________________________________________________________________________

______________________________________________________________________________

____________________________________________

I’m looking forward to your reply.

Yours sincerely,

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】

Dear Sir or Madam,

My name is Li Hua. I’m writing this letter to apply for the opportunity to go to America. As a senior school student who is really interested in learning English, I believe that this journey will make a great difference to me.

I have been learning English since I was a child, which contributes to my excellent English capacity nowadays. Not only can I read and write well, but also I am capable of expressing myself in English fluently. Therefore, I’m sure that I can communicate with the students in America well. What’s more, I’m convinced that honesty is the best policy and as a result, most of my classmates love to make friends with me. In my spare time, I read a lot, especially classical English novels. Besides, I’m fond of sports and do exercise on a regular basis to stay healthy.

I hope the journey abroad can help improve my English as well as broaden my horizons, from which I can learn more about the differences and similarities between China and America.

I’m looking forward to your reply.

Yours sincerely,

Li Hua

【解析】

試題分析：假設(shè)你是新華中學(xué)的李華同學(xué)。你們學(xué)校將要挑選一批學(xué)生赴美國(guó)交流學(xué)習(xí)，你覺得這是一很好的機(jī)會(huì)，希望能夠獲得這次機(jī)會(huì)。請(qǐng)寫一封自薦信，包括以下要點(diǎn)：1.個(gè)人的主要情況；2.英語水平；3.性格特點(diǎn)和興趣愛好；4.希望通過交流實(shí)現(xiàn)的目標(biāo)。寫作時(shí)不要逐句翻譯，可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)以使行文連貫同時(shí)要把所提示的點(diǎn)寫全，語句通順，同時(shí)要注意準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)、語態(tài)、上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關(guān)系。根據(jù)句意適當(dāng)使用并列連詞，同時(shí)也要合理運(yùn)用高級(jí)詞匯和高級(jí)句子為文章增色添彩。注意：1.文章開頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)；2. 字?jǐn)?shù)：100字左右

【亮點(diǎn)說明】這是一封自薦信，采用三段式，語言樸實(shí)，內(nèi)容豐富，句子銜接緊密，布局合理，使用高級(jí)句子。As a senior school student who is really interested in learning English, I believe that this journey will make a great difference to me.定語從句和賓語從句在文中完美結(jié)合；I have been learning English since I was a child, which contributes to my excellent English capacity nowadays.現(xiàn)在完成進(jìn)行時(shí)態(tài)和非限制性定語從句運(yùn)用得當(dāng)；Not only can I read and write well, but also I am capable of expressing myself in English fluently. Not only位于句首使用部分倒裝；from which I can learn more about the differences and similarities between China and America. from which引導(dǎo)的非限制性定語從句堪稱經(jīng)典；另外，Therefore, What’s more, In my spare time, Besides,的運(yùn)用為文章增色添彩。 [