Question

隨著人們生活水平的提高，越來越多的人選擇走出家門去探索世界、體驗生活。相較于傳統(tǒng)的團隊游，自助游越來越受到年輕人的青睞。但在享受自助游的同時，也存在一些問題。請按下列要求用英語寫一篇150詞左右的短文：
1．自助游的優(yōu)點和缺點；
2．你的觀點。
參考詞匯：團隊游 package tour；自助游 self-organized tour；住宿 accommodation
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Answer 1

Compared with the traditional ones, self-organized tours are rapidly gaining popularity among the youth.
During a self-organized tour, arrangements of sightseeing can be flexible and changeable depending on our own interests. Thus, we can spend the time freely and heard for our favorite destinations directly, only in which way can we fully expose ourselves to the local cultures and customs.
Nevertheless, self-arranged tour can bring about great inconvenience in the arrangements of transportation and accommodation. At the same time, the discounts for package tour may not be available. Also, lack of safety guarantees makes it easy to get hurt.
In my opinion, the advantages of self-organized tour seem to outweigh its disadvantages. Thus I suppose that self-organized tour can’t be a wiser choice to enjoy ourselves to the fullest.

試題分析：這是一篇半開放性作文，給出了一個話題“自助游“，并有部分的文字提示：包括1．自助游的優(yōu)點和缺點； 2．你的觀點。給考生自由發(fā)揮的余地較大。對于考生的綜合能力要求較高，要求考生有很強的謀篇布局的能力和組織要點的能力。在完成開放性作文時，首先要選擇自己熟悉的短語或者句型，在你的能力范圍之內(nèi)，選擇句式時要賦予變化，因為這樣你才可以更好的駕馭。同時也要選擇合適的連接詞，把各個要點組織成一個完整的整體，如besides, further, last but not least等。在發(fā)表個人觀點的時候，可以使用諺語來提升整個文章的檔次和文采，也能增加得高分的可能性。
【亮點說明】所給范文語言簡潔，運用了一些詞組：bring about 產(chǎn)生，to the fullest充分. 范文中的句式多變，運用不同的語法知識：Compared with the traditional ones, self-organized tours are rapidly gaining popularity among the youth.這句話用了過去分詞做狀語，    During a self-organized tour, arrangements of sightseeing can be flexible and changeable depending on our own interests. 這句話用現(xiàn)在分詞做狀語，Thus, we can spend the time freely and heard for our favorite destinations directly, only in which way can we fully expose ourselves to the local cultures and customs.這句話用了非限制性定語從句和倒裝句， Also, lack of safety guarantees makes it easy to get hurt. 這句話用了it做形式賓語。