Question

請根據(jù)以下提示，并結合具體事例，用英語寫一篇短文。

People nowadays are facing more and more pressures in life and therefore they are more likely to do something they like in their spare time. They hold the belief that a hobby is a good way to relax themselves and live a colorful life.

注意：1、無需寫標題；

2、除詩歌外，文體不限；

3、內容必須結合你生活中的具體事例；

4、文中不能透露個人姓名和學校名稱；

5、字數(shù)不少于120詞，如引用提示語則不計入總詞數(shù)。

Answer 1

Hobbies are of great importance to those who deal with a lot of pressures at work and in life, since they help them relax and feel free from pressures.

Fishing is my favorite hobby and it enables me to get over depression. At the end of September, the first monthly exam was held. Unfortunately, I performed poorly in mathematics and chemistry, both of which used to be my strong subjects. As a result, my total test score fell dramatically and ranked 400th in our grade. I felt upset afterwards and my mother suggested I should spend some time on my hobby--- fishing for relaxation on a weekend. Packing up my fishing equipment, I was driven to a fishing pond by my father. There I fished for a whole day and calmed myself down. The joy from fishing successfully pushed me out of low spirits.

It's important for everyone to have a hobby, which can function as a way of fighting off pressure and regaining confidence.

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