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假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請(qǐng)你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中共有10處語言錯(cuò)誤，每句中最多有兩處。每處錯(cuò)誤僅涉及一個(gè)單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

增加：在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏字符號(hào)（∧），并在其下面寫出該加的詞。

刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（＼）劃掉。

修改：在錯(cuò)的詞下畫一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。

注意：

1. 每處錯(cuò)誤及其修改均僅限一詞；

2. 只允許修改 10處，多者（從第11處起）不計(jì)分

When I was at middle school, I have a nice classmate, that was the first foreigner I had ever met. She was friendly and very pretty. She was good in three languages, although he was born in China. It was interested that her father was a Frenchman while her mother came from England. All of them were teaching at a university at that time. She was crazy collecting stamps, listening to pop music, as well as playing the football. Her dream was to be an engineer, so she usually studied harder to achieve it. She often told funny stories in English to make us laughing. We all liked her.

【答案】

【1】have 改為had;

【2】that改為who

【3】in 改為at

【4】he 改為she

【5】interested 改為interesting

【6】All 改為 Both;

【7】collecting 前加about

【8】harder 改為 hard;

【9】laughing 改為laugh

【10】are改為is

【解析】

試題分析：本文屬于記敘文，主要介紹了作者的一位老同學(xué)以及這位老同學(xué)的具體信息及家庭情況。

【1】文中第一行have 改為had。根據(jù)前半句中的was 判斷時(shí)態(tài)為一般過去式。所以have要變?yōu)檫^去式had

【2】that改為who。 本題是一個(gè)定語從句，先行詞是a nice classmate，關(guān)系代詞who指代先行詞在句中作主語，不能省略。

【3】文中第二行in 改為at。Be good at 擅長…，固定搭配，所以要將in改為at

【4】文中第三行he 改為she。根據(jù)前半句，主語是she，集合語境這里的主語并沒有發(fā)生改變，所以將he改為she

【5】文中第三行interested 改為interesting， interesting 主語通常是物。而interested主語通常是人，這里是it作形式主語，故將interested 改為interesting

【6】文中第四行All 改為Both; 這里的them指代作者的同學(xué)和她父親，是兩個(gè)人，而all表示三個(gè)人，故用both。

【7】文中第五行collecting 前加about。原句中的collecting前面是動(dòng)詞crazy，動(dòng)詞后面不可能直接再接一個(gè)動(dòng)詞，所以需要介詞來連接。

【8】文中第五行去掉the。球類運(yùn)動(dòng)前面不加冠詞。

【9】文中第六行harder 改為 hard;這里并沒有表示更努力，所以不用比較級(jí)，改為hard。

【10】文中第七行l(wèi)aughing 改為laugh。固定結(jié)構(gòu)make sb do sth，所以將laughing改為laugh。

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