Question

This afternoon I went to see my grandfather by a bus. It was very crowded and I had to stand. Besides me there was a woman held a little boyin her arms. In front of her, a young man occupies two seats, pretending to be sleeping. I heard the little boy curious asking his mother, “What’s wrong with the uncle?” I had thought if perhaps the woman would blame the man. Beyond her expectations, the woman answered with a smile, “Be quiet. This uncle must very tired because of hard work.” The young man must haveheard the word. His face turned red and offered one seat for the woman at once.

Answer 1

小題1:去掉a
小題2:Besides→Beside
小題3:held→holding
小題4:occupies →occupied
小題5:curious→curiously
小題6: if →that或去掉if
小題7:her →my
小題8:must 和 very 之間加be.
小題9:words→words
小題10:for → to

試題分析：本文敘述了作者在一次在公交車上看見的一幕，車上人多,有許多人由于沒有座位而站著，而在作者的前面有一個(gè)婦女抱著一個(gè)小男孩，小男孩看見了一位年輕的男士一個(gè)人占著兩個(gè)座位在那里裝睡，當(dāng)這位年輕人聽到這位婦女說這位叔叔是由于太勤苦太勞累了，他于是就主動(dòng)把座位讓給了這位婦女。
小題1:by+表交通工具的名詞是固定用法。表交通工具的名詞前不用冠詞。 所以bus前也不用冠詞。
小題2:Besides意為：而且；Beside 意為：在......的旁邊。在此應(yīng)該理解為：在我的旁邊有.......。
小題3:there be +名詞做主語，主謂結(jié)構(gòu)完整。holding a little boy是現(xiàn)在分詞短語作后置定語。表示和woman 是邏輯上的主謂關(guān)系。意為：有一個(gè)抱小孩的婦女。
小題4:在In front of her, a young man occupies two seats,中 occupies作謂語，應(yīng)該和整篇文章的時(shí)態(tài)保持一致。全文都是過去時(shí)，這里也應(yīng)該用動(dòng)詞的過去式形式。
小題5:在英語中習(xí)慣用副詞修飾動(dòng)詞，所以要用curiously 來修飾 heard。
小題6:分析句子： I had thought if perhaps the woman would blame the man. 看到  thought后是一個(gè)賓語從句，在賓語從句中if 意為是否，而這里不需要，故去掉或者改為that也可以，that作賓語可以省略。
小題7:Beyond... expectations, 根據(jù)上下文判斷，應(yīng)該是出乎我的預(yù)料，而不是她的。
小題8:must be very tired，表示肯定推測(cè)，一定很累。must是情態(tài)動(dòng)詞，后要求用動(dòng)詞原形而tired 是形容詞，所以需要加be動(dòng)詞符合英語的習(xí)慣。
小題9:word 是不可數(shù)名詞，消息；words 是可數(shù)名詞，那些話。結(jié)合語境，應(yīng)該是年輕人聽到了那些話更合適。
小題10:offer sth to sb 是固定搭配，意思是：提供某事給某人。