Question

3．假定你是李華，你的英國(guó)朋友Jack在一次車(chē)禍中受傷，因而落下殘疾，之后他對(duì)生活變得非常消極．請(qǐng)你給他寫(xiě)一封信，鼓勵(lì)他克服困難，勇敢地面對(duì)生活．
注意：
1.100詞左右；
2．開(kāi)頭已給出，不計(jì)入字?jǐn)?shù)．
Dear Jack，
I'm sorry to hear that you are in low spirits now because you had an accident recently and got seriously injured．
                                                                               
Yours，
Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 這是一篇鼓勵(lì)朋友克服困難，勇敢地面對(duì)生活的作文．根據(jù)題目要求可知用第一人稱(chēng)和一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)．內(nèi)容包括：一 對(duì)于對(duì)方的遭遇表示同情；二 鼓勵(lì)他克服困難，勇敢地面對(duì)生活；三 再次表示期盼．
高分句型：
1．There are so many people with disabilities who are still fighting for their dreams．句子里 who 引導(dǎo)定語(yǔ)從句，代指先行詞people with disabilities；people with disabilities 表示"殘疾人"．
有如此多的殘疾人正在為了 他們的夢(mèng)想而奮斗．
2．Only in this way can you regain your hope for a beautiful life in the future．句子里Only引導(dǎo)狀語(yǔ) in this way位于句首，主句 can you regain your hope for a beautiful life in the future用了部分倒裝．
只有用這種方式，你才能重新獲得擁有美好未來(lái)的希望．

解答 Dear Jack，
I'm sorry to hear that you are in low spirits now because you had an accident recently and got seriously injured．（對(duì)于對(duì)方的遭遇表示同情）
Life is not always smooth．We have to learn to take the bad with the good．So，you should take a positive attitude towards life．There are so many people with disabilities who are still fighting for their dreams．【高分句型一】Please don't lose heart．There is a saying，"Nothing is impossible for a willing heart．"Just remember that nothing in the world is too difficult if you put your heart into it．Only in this way can you regain your hope for a beautiful life in the future．【高分句型二】（鼓勵(lì)他克服困難，勇敢地面對(duì)生活）
I look forward to hearing good news from you!（再次表示期盼）
Yours，
Li Hua

點(diǎn)評(píng) 考查開(kāi)發(fā)類(lèi)作文．
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