Question

6．作為一名高中學(xué)生，你將參加主題為"let's ride bicycles"的英語演講比賽．請撰寫一份演講稿，主要內(nèi)容包括：
（1）目前汽車帶來的空氣污染和交通堵塞等問題；
（2）騎自行車的益處，如節(jié)能環(huán)保、有利健康等．
參考詞匯：低碳生活（low-carbon life）；節(jié)能（energy saving）；有毒排放（poisonous emission）；交通堵塞（traffic congestion）
注意：1．詞數(shù)100左右；2．可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫．
Good morning，everyone，
I'm a senior middle school student．The topic of my speech is"Let's Ride Bicycles"．
As is known to all，with the improvement of people's living standards，cars have become a popular means of transportation，bringing great convenience to our life．（高分句型）However，they have also caused some problems such as air pollution and traffic jams．
How can we solve the problem then？As far as I'm concerned，riding bicycles is a good solution．（高分句型）For one thing，bicycles don't need any petrol and they are energy-saving．For another，bicycles are environmentally friendly because they won't give off waste gas．What's more，riding bicycles is a good way to exercise and it is beneficial to our health．（高分句型）
Therefore，let's take the responsibility to built up a low-carbon city by riding bicycles．（高分句型）Come on and join us．
That's all!Thank you!．

Answer 1

分析 這是一篇提綱類作文．作為一名高中學(xué)生，將參加主題為"Let's Ride Bicycles"的英語演講比賽．請撰寫一份演講稿，主要內(nèi)容包括：1．目前汽車帶來的空氣污染和交通堵塞等問題；2．騎自行車的益處，如節(jié)能環(huán)保、有利健康等．需要寫的內(nèi)容已經(jīng)粗略給出，需要我們翻譯成完整通順的句子，適當(dāng)添加些內(nèi)容，使文章更充實(shí)．寫作時注意準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關(guān)系，不能出現(xiàn)文章脫節(jié)問題．一定要給出自己的看法．盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，同時也要注意使用高級詞匯和高級句型為文章潤色．注意要求的詞數(shù)100詞左右，不要太多也不要太少．
【亮點(diǎn)說明】As far as I'm concerned，riding bicycles is a good solution．動名詞作主語，謂語動詞用單數(shù)．For another，bicycles are environmentally friendly because they won't give off waste gas．含有一個原因狀語從句．
As is known to all，with the improvement of people's living standards，cars have become a popular means of transportation，bringing great convenience to our life．（高分句型）
As far as I'm concerned，riding bicycles is a good solution．（高分句型）
What's more，riding bicycles is a good way to exercise and it is beneficial to our health．（高分句型）
 Therefore，let's take the responsibility to built up a low-carbon city by riding bicycles．（高分句型）

解答 Good morning，everyone，
       I'm a senior middle school student．The topic of my speech is"Let's Ride Bicycles"．
       As is known to all，with the improvement of people's living standards，cars have become a popular means of transportation，bringing great convenience to our life．（高分句型）However，they have also caused some problems such as air pollution and traffic jams．
       How can we solve the problem then？As far as I'm concerned，riding bicycles is a good solution．（高分句型）For one thing，bicycles don't need any petrol and they are energy-saving．For another，bicycles are environmentally friendly because they won't give off waste gas．What's more，riding bicycles is a good way to exercise and it is beneficial to our health．（高分句型）
       Therefore，let's take the responsibility to built up a low-carbon city by riding bicycles．（高分句型）Come on and join us．
       That's all!Thank you!

點(diǎn)評 英語寫作是一項(xiàng)主觀性較強(qiáng)的測試題．它不僅考查學(xué)生的寫作基礎(chǔ)而且還考查學(xué)生在寫作過程中綜合運(yùn)用語言的能力．在撰寫時要注意主謂語一致，時態(tài)呼應(yīng)，用詞貼切等．要提高英語寫作水平，需要兩方面的訓(xùn)練：一是語言基礎(chǔ)方面的訓(xùn)練，要有扎實(shí)的造句、翻譯等基本功，即用詞法、句法等知識造出正確無誤的句子；二是寫作知識和能力 方面的訓(xùn)練以掌握寫作方面的基本方法和技巧．