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13．科技的發(fā)展使得通訊方式也越來越方便快捷；幾乎每個高中生都有了自己的QQ，可以用QQ和自己的朋友聊天，向老師問問題，交流思想．但有的同學(xué)花太多的時間在QQ上，有的QQ好友甚至有幾百人之多，請你就以上現(xiàn)象加以分析，并發(fā)表自己的看法．
注意：詞數(shù)120～150詞．
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Answer 1

分析 本文是一篇議論文．文章給出了簡單的漢語提示，給學(xué)生較大的自由發(fā)揮的空間，有利于學(xué)生能力水平的體現(xiàn)．根據(jù)所給提示信息，針對這一現(xiàn)象發(fā)表看法，以此為話題進(jìn)行思維和聯(lián)想，自由發(fā)揮發(fā)表自己的看法，又屬于提綱作文．
在寫作時以第三人稱為主，時態(tài)以一般現(xiàn)在時為主．
寫作要點：（1）QQ的好處 （2）QQ的壞處（3）自己的看法
重要短語：with the development of…（隨著…的發(fā)展），communicate with…（與…交流），chat with…（與…聊天），solve one's puzzles（解決疑難），exchanage one's thoughts（交流思想），spend time doing（花費時間做某事），use up（用完，用光），bring sb much convenience（給某人帶來便捷），limit one's time on sth （在…限制時間），devote oneself to one's study（全身心投入學(xué)習(xí)）．
【高分句型一】
1．Almost every Senior student has their own QQ number，with which they can chat with their friends，ask their teachers to help them solve their puzzles and exchanage their thoughts．
此處是由"介詞+關(guān)系代詞"引導(dǎo)的非限制性定語從句，主句為"Almost every Senior student has their own QQ number"，關(guān)系代詞"which"指代前面主句中的"QQ number"．
【高分句型二】
2．However，some students have spent too much time chatting with their QQ friends，some of whom are totally strangers．
此處是由"代詞+of+whom"引導(dǎo)的非限制性定語從句，主句為"some students have spent too much time chatting with their QQ friends"，關(guān)系代詞"whom"指代前面主句中的"QQ friends"．
【高分句型三】
3．What's worse，some students have hundreds of QQ friends on the QQ，using up almost all their spare time，even in the classroom．
此處是由現(xiàn)在分詞短語+賓語"using up almost all their spare time"作伴隨狀語，主句為"some students have hundreds of QQ friends on the QQ"，主句為"some students have hundreds of QQ friends on the QQ"，主句的主語"some students"與動詞"use up"構(gòu)成邏輯上的主動關(guān)系．
【高分句型四】
4．I ③do think that QQ can bring us much convenience and benefit when communicating with others，①but ②what we should do is use it properly and reasonably．
   ①此處是由連詞"but"引導(dǎo)的并列句，與前面的句子為轉(zhuǎn)折關(guān)系．
  ②此處是由疑問代詞"what"引導(dǎo)的主語從句，"what"在從句中作動詞"do"的賓語，由于主語從句中含有動詞"do"，因此表語從句中省略了"to"，即為"what we should do is to use it properly and reasonably"．
  ③此處為"do/did/does+V-原形"表強(qiáng)調(diào)，"do think"意為"確實/的確認(rèn)為"；連詞"that"后為賓語從句．

解答 With the development of science and technology，the way of communication has became increasingly diverse and convenient．People can communicate with their friends or relatively freely in different ways．Among them chatting on the QQ is one of the most popular ones．Almost every Senior student has their own QQ number，with which they can chat with their friends，ask their teachers to help them solve their puzzles and exchanage their thoughts．【高分句型一】QQ is really a helpful tool to them．（QQ的好處）
     However，some students have spent too much time chatting with their QQ friends，some of whom are totally strangers．【高分句型二】Most of the chatting on the QQ is completely meaningless．What's worse，some students have hundreds of QQ friends on the QQ，using up almost all their spare time，even in the classroom．【高分句型三】（QQ的壞處）
      I do think that QQ can bring us much convenience and benefit when communicating with others，but what we should do is use it properly and reasonably．【高分句型四】
We should limit our time on it and devote ourselves to our study．（自己的看法）

點評 開放性作文給出一定的寫作主題，并此為基礎(chǔ)進(jìn)行思維和聯(lián)想，自由發(fā)揮．不僅考查學(xué)生在內(nèi)容、結(jié)構(gòu)安排、語言運用和組織方面的能力，而且對學(xué)生的想像力、發(fā)散思維、歸納判斷能力也有很高的要求．寫好這類作文要注意幾個步驟：1． 認(rèn)真審題，找準(zhǔn)提示語中的關(guān)鍵詞或句，確定中心思想．2． 依據(jù)關(guān)鍵句，草擬提綱，梳理文章的脈絡(luò)3． 準(zhǔn)確定位人稱、時態(tài)．注意使用高級詞匯和高級句型使文章顯得更有檔次．4．最后還要認(rèn)真查驗是否有漏寫情況，有無拼寫錯誤及標(biāo)點誤用等．