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3．假設(shè)你是Lily，你的朋友Alice寫信給你，訴說了她的問題，請你根據(jù)以下情況，給她寫一封回信．
1．父母把她當(dāng)小孩看待；
2．父母對她要求嚴(yán)格，不準(zhǔn)上網(wǎng)聊天等；
3．父母不滿意她的成績．
注意：
1．詞數(shù)100左右；
2．可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫；
3．信的開頭和結(jié)尾已寫好，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)．
Dear Alice，
I know exactly how you feel!
              ．
Yours，
Lily．

Answer 1

分析 考查應(yīng)用文寫作．本文要求考生以Lily的身份給朋友Alice寫信．因?yàn)锳lice的父母親對她要求很嚴(yán)格，不準(zhǔn)上網(wǎng)聊天，對她的成績不滿意，并把她當(dāng)小孩子看待．回信要點(diǎn)：1．你應(yīng)該和父母親多交流，多從父母的角度看問題；2．網(wǎng)絡(luò)聊天是很危險(xiǎn)的，我們要盡可能地減少聊天的時(shí)間．3．目前對我們來說最重要的是學(xué)習(xí)，我們要把所有的時(shí)間和精力都放在學(xué)習(xí)上．4．分析成績不好的原因，尋求老師的幫助．在寫作時(shí)，要注意使用合適的串聯(lián)詞把各要點(diǎn)串聯(lián)在一起，不要出現(xiàn)中國式英語的思維，如果可能，可以使用諺語等提示文章的檔次．
Even now，there are times when I feel like I'm being treated like a child by my parents．（高分句型一）句中when引導(dǎo)的是定語從句
Chat rooms can be dangerous，and you need to make it clear to them that you understand the risks and know how to get out of a situation that makes you feel uncomfortable．（高分句型二）句中帶有that引導(dǎo)的限制性定語從句
If your parents are truly unsatisfied with your grades，I advise you to talk with them and you can get your teachers involved if necessary．（高分句型三）句中If your parents are truly unsatisfied with your grades屬于條件狀語從句

解答 Dear Alice，
    I know exactly how you feel!Even now，there are times when I feel like I'm being treated like a child by my parents．（高分句型一）One of the hardest things for parents is seeing their kids grow up．You should try telling your parents how you feel，and try to see things from their sides．Chat rooms can be dangerous，and you need to make it clear to them that you understand the risks and know how to get out of a situation that makes you feel uncomfortable．（高分句型二）As for your grades，what matters is that you're giving all your effort．If your parents are truly unsatisfied with your grades，I advise you to talk with them and you can get your teachers involved if necessary．（高分句型三）
                                                                                                                                                                                                                           Yours，
                                                                                                                                                                                                                              Lily

點(diǎn)評 英語寫作是一項(xiàng)主觀性較強(qiáng)的測試題．它不僅考查學(xué)生的寫作基礎(chǔ)而且還考查學(xué)生在寫作過程中綜合運(yùn)用語言的能力．在撰寫時(shí)要注意主謂語一致，時(shí)態(tài)呼應(yīng)，用詞貼切等．要提高英語寫作水平，需要兩方面的訓(xùn)練：一是語言基礎(chǔ)方面的訓(xùn)練，要有扎實(shí)的造句、翻譯等基本功，即用詞法、句法等知識造出正確無誤的句子；二是寫作知識和能力 方面的訓(xùn)練以掌握寫作方面的基本方法和技巧．