Question

18．調(diào)查表明，百分之七十以上的孩子很少或僅僅是偶爾參與戶外活動(dòng)．專家認(rèn)為，缺乏戶外運(yùn)動(dòng)會(huì)對(duì)學(xué)生乃至成人的身心健康產(chǎn)生不良影響．為了倡導(dǎo)中學(xué)生接近大自然，某中學(xué)生英文報(bào)舉辦了一次征文活動(dòng)．請(qǐng)你根據(jù)下面所提供的內(nèi)容用英語(yǔ)寫一篇短文．
要點(diǎn)：1．戶外活動(dòng)的好處；
2．戶外活動(dòng)的方式；
3．戶外活動(dòng)需要注意的事項(xiàng)．
注意：1．短文必須包括以上所有要點(diǎn)，并適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以保證表達(dá)的連貫；
2．詞數(shù)：120-150詞．開頭已給出，該部分不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)；
3．不得抄襲，所有雷同作文均以零分計(jì)；
4．短文中不得提及有關(guān)考生個(gè)人身份的任何信息，如校名、人名等．
A survey suggests that more than 70percent of children today have little contact with the natural world，and that this is having a huge impact on their health and development．

Answer 1

分析 這是一篇提綱類作文．根據(jù)題目要求可知用第一人稱敘述，時(shí)態(tài)以一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)為主．內(nèi)容分成四部分：一敘述調(diào)查結(jié)果引出話題；二戶外活動(dòng)的好處；三戶外活動(dòng)的方式；四戶外活動(dòng)需要注意的事項(xiàng)．
高分句型：
1．When （引導(dǎo)時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)從句）we are outdoors and in the natural world，we can not only breathe fresh air and enjoy the beautiful scenery，but also（和not only 構(gòu)成并列句式） broaden our horizons and develop new skills
當(dāng)我們到戶外的大自然中的時(shí)候，我們不僅能呼吸到新鮮的空氣，欣賞的美景，而且能開拓視野，養(yǎng)成新的技能．
2．Visiting farms（doing做主語(yǔ)） is also a good way of getting out and about，as（引導(dǎo)原因狀語(yǔ)從句） they are places where（引導(dǎo)定語(yǔ)從句，代指先行詞places） you can enrich your knowledge and enjoy fresh fruits and vegetables．
去參觀農(nóng)場(chǎng)是戶外活動(dòng)的好方式，因?yàn)槟阍谀抢锟梢载S富你的知識(shí)，吃到新鮮的水果和蔬菜．

解答 A survey suggests that more than 70 percent of children today have little contact with the natural world，and that this is having a huge impact on their health and development．I think it is time for us to take action against this trend and get close to nature（敘述調(diào)查結(jié)果引出話題）．
   When we are outdoors and in the natural world，we can not only breathe fresh air and enjoy the beautiful scenery，but also broaden our horizons and develop new skills【高分句型一】．（戶外活動(dòng)的好處）
   There are many different ways we can get out into the natural world，such as backpacking，cycling，camping and mountaineering．Visiting farms is also a good way of getting out and about，as they are places where you can enrich your knowledge and enjoy fresh fruits and vegetables．【高分句型二】Many people also find that playing sport outdoors is a good way of enjoying the open air while being part of a team（戶外活動(dòng)的方式）
    Whatever you do，though，remember to stay safe．When you're outside，it's better to be accompanied by parents or friends（戶外活動(dòng)需要注意的事項(xiàng)）．

點(diǎn)評(píng) 環(huán)保類作文是熱門話題，所以平時(shí)學(xué)習(xí)時(shí)要注意積累這些話題的詞匯和內(nèi)容，這需要我們多讀，多聽，多記，不要書到用時(shí)方恨少．