Question

19．請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下提示，并結(jié)合事例，用英語(yǔ)寫一篇短文．
     There is no such thing as a free lunch．Success doesn't come to anyone who sits back and does nothing at all．As they say，"As you sow，so shall you reap（收獲）．"
    注意事項(xiàng)：
1．無(wú)須寫標(biāo)題，不得照抄英語(yǔ)提示；
2．除詩(shī)歌外，文體不限；
3．不能使用真實(shí)姓名和學(xué)校名稱；
4．短文詞數(shù)不少于100．

Answer 1

分析 考查開放性作文．開放性作文給出了一個(gè)話題，并有部分的文字提示，給考生自由發(fā)揮的余地較大．這對(duì)于考生的綜合能力要求較高，要求考生有很強(qiáng)的謀篇布局的能力和組織要點(diǎn)的能力．在完成開放性作文時(shí)，首先要選擇自己熟悉的短語(yǔ)或者句型，在你的能力范圍之內(nèi)，選擇句式時(shí)要有變化，因?yàn)檫@樣你才可以更好的駕馭．同時(shí)也要選擇合適的連接詞，把各個(gè)要點(diǎn)組織成一個(gè)完整的整體．文章是要用一個(gè)具體的事例來(lái)說(shuō)明"一分耕耘一分收獲"的道理，用第一人稱和一般過(guò)去時(shí)態(tài)為主．
重點(diǎn)短語(yǔ)和句型：
have a desire for 渴望
belong to屬于
make every effort to do努力做…
make the best of 充分利用
catch up with趕上
pay off成功，有回報(bào)，
As the old saying goes，"no pains，no gains．"
常言道："不勞無(wú)獲．"非限制性定語(yǔ)從句．
So discouraged was I that I didn't want to do anything．
我是如此灰心喪氣以致于什么都不想做了．so+形容詞置于句首，句子要部分倒裝句．
I didn't do exercises and even attend to what the teacher said in the classes．
我不做作業(yè)，甚至也不聽課． what引導(dǎo)賓語(yǔ)從句作attend to的賓語(yǔ)．
Only then did I realize I was wrong and that success will not wait for me．
直到那時(shí)我才意識(shí)到我錯(cuò)了，成功不是等待．only加狀語(yǔ)提前，句子要部分倒裝句．

解答 參考范文：
Everyone has a desire for success while success only belongs to the hard-working people．As the old saying goes，"no pains，no gains．"（高分句型一）
I failed in the last exam．So discouraged was I that I didn't want to do anything．（高分句型二） I didn't do exercises and even attend to what the teacher said in the classes．（高分句型三） Later on，I found things got even worse．Meanwhile，a great many students made every effort to study．Only then did I realize I was wrong and that success will not wait for me．（高分句型四） So I made the best of every minute to catch up with my classmates．Now I'm progressing in my studies．I feel confident that my effort will pay off eventually．
My story makes me believe failure is temporary for a diligent person but permanent for the lazy．One's efforts will surely be rewarded with success no matter how big or small the success is．

點(diǎn)評(píng) 書面表達(dá)題考查的是英語(yǔ)的應(yīng)用能力．寫作時(shí)要注意：要點(diǎn)的提煉要全；關(guān)鍵短語(yǔ)和句型要寫對(duì)；過(guò)渡詞和過(guò)渡短語(yǔ)要自然，通順地道；最后還要注意人稱和時(shí)態(tài)使用要正確．