Question

5．請以"Failure makes me grow up"為題，并結(jié)合自身事例，用英語寫一篇短文．
內(nèi)容：1．講述一次你的失敗經(jīng)歷，帶給你的影響以及你是如何應(yīng)對的．
2．這次經(jīng)歷帶給你的啟示
注意：除詩歌外，文體不限；文中不得透露個人姓名和學校名稱；
Failure makes me grow up
We all know that"Failure is the mother of success．If we can learn to turn a failure to our advantage，we will have learnt another secret to success．            ．

Answer 1

分析 這是一篇提綱類作文．以"Failure makes me grow up"為題，并結(jié)合自身事例，用英語寫一篇短文．寫作時注意準確運用時態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關(guān)系，不能出現(xiàn)文章脫節(jié)問題．一定要給出自己的看法．盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，同時也要注意使用高級詞匯和高級句型為文章潤色．
【亮點說明】What failure to us is what sunshine to the trees，without which we cannot arrive at the place where we hope to go．這里含有兩個定語從句；Before I decided to give up，it was my math teacher who gave me a hand and told me that failure could also teach us a lesson．這里含有一個定語從句和一個強調(diào)句．What she told me encouraged me to face with my math problem bravely．這里含有一個主語從句．

解答 Failure makes me grow up
      We all know that Failure is the mother of success．If we can learn to turn a failure to our advantage，we will have learnt another secret to success．What failure to us is what sunshine to the trees，without which we cannot arrive at the place where we hope to go．（高分句型一） Although failure is annoying，as long as we face it bravely，we will succeed sooner or later．（高分句型二）
      There was once a time when I had difficulty in math．However hard I tried，my math grade was still bad．Later，I failed to pass an important examination．Before I decided to give up，it was my math teacher who gave me a hand and told me that failure could also teach us a lesson．（高分句型三）What she told me encouraged me to face with my math problem bravely．Knowing the importance of failure，I was not afraid of math．Finally，my math grades improved．
      Taking my experience into conclusion，everyone can conquer the unavoidable failure in our life so long as we have faith in ourselves．（高分句型四）Treasure the failure，and you will win the treasure．

點評 英語寫作是一項主觀性較強的測試題．它不僅考查學生的寫作基礎(chǔ)而且還考查學生在寫作過程中綜合運用語言的能力．在撰寫時要注意主謂語一致，時態(tài)呼應(yīng)，用詞貼切等．要提高英語寫作水平，需要兩方面的訓練：一是語言基礎(chǔ)方面的訓練，要有扎實的造句、翻譯等基本功，即用詞法、句法等知識造出正確無誤的句子；二是寫作知識和能力 方面的訓練以掌握寫作方面的基本方法和技巧．