Question

19．畢業(yè)季也是感恩季，來自澳大利亞的Feinstein在她的網(wǎng)站上發(fā)起感謝信接力的活動．假設(shè)你是紅星中學(xué)高三學(xué)生李華，請寫一封感謝信參加接力，內(nèi)容包括：
1．感謝的人或事物；
2．感謝的原因；
3．你的美好愿望．
注意：詞數(shù)不少于50．
Dear，
I am writing to you to let you know how lucky I am to have you as a teacher．From day one，I enjoyed each and every class of yours．You could always make your lessons informative，educational and enjoyable all at the same time．Every day I looked forward to your class，which was a surprise from a student who hated and dreaded English．It was you who awakened my interest in English and restored my confidence in myself．I enjoyed everything you taught us，from the English language to American culture．The smell of the pancakes we made together in your class is still clear in our minds，and it simply makes my mouth water．
You are a special teacher whom I will always remember with fond memories．You are a great inspiration to us all!
A big and warm"Thank you!"from your beloved student!May you continue to inspire greatness in all of your students!（157 words）

Yours，
Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 本篇書面表達(dá)屬于提綱類作文，根據(jù)提示信息請寫一封感謝信參加接力，寫作時注意以下幾點：1、感謝的人或事物；感謝的原因；你的美好愿望．2、提綱是文章的總體框架，要在提綱的范圍內(nèi)進(jìn)行分析、構(gòu)思和想象．3、根據(jù)要表達(dá)的內(nèi)容確定句子的時態(tài)、語態(tài)，就本文而言應(yīng)該用一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)并結(jié)合部分一般過去時．4．注意使用高級詞匯和句式，以增加文章的亮點．
（高分句型一）You could always make your lessons informative，educational and enjoyable all at the same time．
該句型使用了make+賓語+賓語補(bǔ)足語，informative，educational and enjoyable 三個形容詞做賓語補(bǔ)足語；
（高分句型二）It was you who awakened my interest in English and restored my confidence in myself．
  該句使用了強(qiáng)調(diào)句It was you who…強(qiáng)調(diào)主語you； 
（高分句型三） You are a special teacher whom I will always remember with fond memories．
該句式使用了whom引導(dǎo)定語從句，whom充當(dāng)賓語；
高級詞匯：informative，educational and enjoyable 有信息的、教育的、有樂趣的；awaken喚醒；inspire激勵；

解答 Dear Samantha，
    I am writing to you to let you know how lucky I am to have you as a teacher．From day one，I enjoyed each and every class of yours．（高分句型一）You could always make your lessons informative，educational and enjoyable all at the same time．Every day I looked forward to your class，which was a surprise from a student who hated and dreaded English．（高分句型二）It was you who awakened my interest in English and restored my confidence in myself．I enjoyed everything you taught us，from the English language to American culture．The smell of the pancakes we made together in your class is still clear in our minds，and it simply makes my mouth water．
   （高分句型三） You are a special teacher whom I will always remember with fond memories．You are a great inspiration to us all!
   A big and warm"Thank you!"from your beloved student!May you continue to inspire greatness in all of your students!（157 words）
                                                                                                 Yours，
                                                                                                  Li Hua

點評 提綱作文在寫作時要注意內(nèi)容是否包含了所有要點．寫作時注意準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關(guān)系，盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，同時也要注意使用高級詞匯和高級句型使文章顯得更有檔次，平時需注意積累短語和重要句型．