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3．Nowadays，a brand new way of shopping is attracting increasing customers：online group buying，also known as collective buying，which offers products and services at reduced prices on the condition that a minimum number of buyers would make the purchase．Origins of group buying can be traced to China where group buying or team buying was executed to get discount prices when a large group of people were willing to buy the same item
 China group buying transaction volume hit US$ 1.74 billion （RMB 11 billion） in 2011，up 550% from the same period in 2010，according to a report by Tuan800．com，the Beijing-based daily deal sites aggregator．The report also shows that 2011 was the year that the Chinese Group-buying market got more and more concentrated with more and more Chinese，most of whom are white collars，teenagers and college students enjoying the benefits of group buying．And，among the most favorable buying categories are restaurant，movie and hotel booking for travelling．
    Through group buying，on one hand，customers get a lower price than normal．On the other hand，businessmen also cut down expenses on marketing．That is the reason why group buying websites spring up like mushrooms in recent months．What is the most attractive in group buying must be the unbelievable discounts．Facing the discounts，customers always couldn't resist the impulse to buy the products，even though they do not need them．
[寫作內(nèi)容]
1． 以約30個詞概括短文的要點．
2． 以約120個詞寫一篇關(guān)于"團購"的短文，至少包括以下的內(nèi)容要點．
（1）你對團購的看法并陳述理由．
（2）談?wù)勀阕约夯蛩�人的一次團購經(jīng)歷．
（3）請你給團購者一些有用的建議．
[寫作要求]
1．作文中可以使用親身經(jīng)歷或虛構(gòu)的故事，或其他論述方法，也可以參照閱讀材料的內(nèi)容，但不得直接引用原文中的句子．
2．作文中不能出現(xiàn)真實姓名和學(xué)校名稱．
[評分標準]
概括準確，語言規(guī)范，內(nèi)容合適，語句連貫．

Answer 1

分析 本文是讀寫任務(wù)型寫作，這類作文可按照三段式模板寫：第一段：概況所給短文要點．第二段：過渡詞引出主題句---闡述理由．第三段：個人觀點．特別要注意第一段的概括．用自己的語言概括，不能照搬照抄原文． 時態(tài)用一般現(xiàn)在時．人稱用第一和第三人稱． 重要短語：the concept of （…的概念），become popular in（在…變得受歡迎），result from（由…產(chǎn)生），from one's point of view（某人認為），cooperate with（與…合作），at the lowest price （以最低的價錢），on a large scale（大規(guī)模的），as well as （和，又，也），as for（關(guān)于），reliable websites（可信賴的網(wǎng)站），avoid doing（避免做某事），be cheated by（被欺騙）．
【高分句型一】
1．Group buying developed rapidly and became more and more popular in China，resulting from the discounts given．
此處是由現(xiàn)在分詞短語"resulting from…"作原因狀語，主句為"Group buying developed rapidly and became more and more popular in China"．
【高分句型二】
2．For one thing，by cooperating with each other we can buy whatever we want without going out and get the most satisfactory goods at the lowest price．
此處是由疑問代詞"whatever"引導(dǎo)的賓語從句，"whatever"在從句中作動詞"want"的賓語．
【高分句型三】
3．I got the tickets as well as two bottles of green tea which saved me so much．
此處是由關(guān)系代詞"which"引導(dǎo)的定語從句，先行詞為"the tickets as well as two bottles of green tea"，關(guān)系代詞"which"在從句中主語．
【高分句型四】
4．Secondly，buy with clear purpose no matter how cheap it is．
此處是由疑問副詞"however或no matter how"引導(dǎo)的讓步狀語從句，結(jié)構(gòu)為"no matter how/however+形容詞+主語+謂語"．

解答 The passage introduces the concept of group buying and its origins．Group buying developed rapidly and became more and more popular in China，resulting from the discounts given．【高分句型一】（概括）
From my point of view，the advantages of group buying are obvious．For one thing，by cooperating with each other we can buy whatever we want without going out and get the most satisfactory goods at the lowest price．【高分句型二】For another，manufacturers can sell goods on a larger scale and reduce marketing expenses．（看法及理由）
Last week，I surfed a well-known group buying website for two film tickets．With only 30 yuan，I got the tickets as well as two bottles of green tea which saved me so much．【高分句型三】lIt was a very nice experience．（經(jīng)歷）
As for suggestions for group buying，firstly，you should read the advertisements and the comments from other customers carefully．Secondly，buy with clear purpose no matter how cheap it is．【高分句型四】Thirdly，it is better to shop on famous and reliable websites to avoid being cheated by some cheating websites．（建議---個人觀點）

點評 讀寫任務(wù)型寫作是將閱讀與寫作有機結(jié)合，要求考生既能讀懂文章信息，又要依據(jù)要求規(guī)范連貫地表達內(nèi)容，其中準確概括很有挑戰(zhàn)且十分重要，根據(jù)記敘文、議論文、說明文等不同文體作相應(yīng)概括，總的來說，遵循以下步驟：確定主題句；尋找關(guān)鍵詞；重構(gòu)主題句；重組支持句．寫作時注意準確運用時態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關(guān)系，盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，同時也要注意使用高級詞匯和高級句型使文章顯得更有檔次，平時需注意積累短語和重要句型．