Question

【題目】假設(shè)你是李華。你的英國(guó)筆友John寫信告訴你近日他由于沉迷于電腦游戲，健康受到很大影響。他十分焦慮。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)以下要點(diǎn)提示，給他寫一封回信，建議他養(yǎng)成良好的生活習(xí)慣。

要點(diǎn)如下：①限制玩游戲的時(shí)間，把精力逐漸轉(zhuǎn)移到其他事情上；②規(guī)定起床和睡覺(jué)的時(shí)間，形成良好的作息時(shí)間；③每天鍛煉半小時(shí)，增強(qiáng)體質(zhì)。

注意：詞數(shù)120左右。

補(bǔ)充詞匯：be addicted to沉迷于

Dear John,

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Best wishes!

Yours sincerely,

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】Dear John,

I’m sorry to hear that you re addicted to computer games which have had a bad influence on your health. I know you worry about it very much. As a good friend, I'm willing to give you some advice.

Firstly, you should limit the time that you spend playing computer games and pay more attention to other things. Secondly, you should get up and go to bed at a specific time so that you can form a habit of getting up and going to bed regularly. Thirdly, you should do exercise for about half an hour every day to strengthen your body. I do hope that you can get rid of computer games and form a healthy lifestyle.

Bst wishes!

Yours sincerely,

Li Hua

【解析】

這是一篇應(yīng)用文寫作。

第1步：根據(jù)提示可知, 本篇為一封電子郵件；假設(shè)你是李華。你的英國(guó)筆友John寫信告訴你近日他由于沉迷于電腦游戲，健康受到很大影響。他十分焦慮。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)以下要點(diǎn)提示，給他寫一封回信，建議他養(yǎng)成良好的生活習(xí)慣。要點(diǎn)如下：①限制玩游戲的時(shí)間，把精力逐漸轉(zhuǎn)移到其他事情上；②規(guī)定起床和睡覺(jué)的時(shí)間，形成良好的作息時(shí)間；③每天鍛煉半小時(shí)，增強(qiáng)體質(zhì)。

第2步：根據(jù)寫作要求, 確定關(guān)鍵詞（組）, 如：be addicted to（沉迷于）；have a bad influence on（對(duì)……有壞影響）；worry about（擔(dān)心）；be willing to（愿意）等。

第3步：根據(jù)提示及關(guān)鍵詞（組）進(jìn)行遣詞造句, 注意主謂一致和時(shí)態(tài)問(wèn)題。此處文章主要應(yīng)用第一人稱和一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)。

第4步：連句成文, 注意使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B詞進(jìn)行句子之間的銜接與過(guò)渡, 書寫一定要規(guī)范清晰, 保持整潔美觀的卷面是非常重要的。