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增加:在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏詞符號(∧)并在其下面寫出該加的詞.
刪除:把多余的詞用斜線(\)劃掉.
修改:在錯(cuò)的詞下劃一橫線,并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞.
注意:1.每處錯(cuò)誤及其修改均僅限一詞    2.只允許修改10處,多者(從第十一處起)不計(jì)分
Dear President
I'm writing to tell my trouble in life.And I hope you can do something to help us.Planes are slow driving me mad.I live near a airport and the passing planes can be heard night and day.The airport built years ago,but for some reason it could not be used then.Last year,however,it comes into use.Over a hundred of people have been driven away from their home by the noise.I am one of the few people who remain here.Sometimes I think this house will be knocked down by a passing plane.I have been offered a large sum of money to go away,and I am determined to staying here.Everybody say I must be mad and them are probably right.

分析 作者因?yàn)楦浇臋C(jī)場太吵,影響了正常的生活,但又不想離開,所以想總理寫信反映自己的情況.

解答 Dear President
I'm writing to tell my trouble in life.And I hope you can do something to help us.Planes are slow driving me mad.I live near a airport and the passing planes can be heard night and day.The airport∧built years ago,but for some reason it could not be used then.Last year,however,it comes into use.Over a hundred of people have been driven away from their home by the noise.I am one of the few people who remain here.Sometimes I think this house will be knocked down by a passing plane.I have been offered a large sum of money to go away,and I am determined to staying here.Everybody say I must be mad and them are probably right.
詳解:
1.slow改為slowly;考查副詞,此處用副詞作狀語,修飾動詞drive.
2.a(chǎn)改為an;考查冠詞,airport是以原因因素開頭的單詞,前面用a泛指"一個(gè)".
3.built前加was;考查動詞的語態(tài),airport以動詞built是動賓關(guān)系,根據(jù)時(shí)間狀語可知built前面加was構(gòu)成一般過去時(shí)的被動語態(tài).
4.comes改為came;考查動詞的時(shí)態(tài),由時(shí)間狀語Last year可知此處要用動詞的一般過去時(shí).
5.去掉hundred后面of;考查固定用法,hundred,thousand 等前面有具體的數(shù)量詞時(shí)后面不能在加of.
6.home改為homes;考查名詞單復(fù)數(shù),結(jié)合句意"他們被迫離開他們的家"可知此處要用復(fù)數(shù)形式homes.
7.a(chǎn)nd改為but;考查連詞,結(jié)合上下文分析前后之間為轉(zhuǎn)折關(guān)系,故用but.    
8.staying改為stay;考查動詞,am determined to do 是固定搭配,意為"決心做某事".
9.say改為says;考查動詞的時(shí)態(tài),everybody作主語,謂語動詞用單數(shù),又此處陳述一個(gè)客觀事實(shí),故用動詞的第三人稱單數(shù)形式says.
10.them改為they;考查人稱代詞,句中動詞缺少主語,故用人稱代詞的主格形式they作主語.

點(diǎn)評 短文改錯(cuò)首先要通讀短文,把握中心思想,再結(jié)合上下文的語境充分運(yùn)用基礎(chǔ)知識,從句型結(jié)構(gòu),固定搭配,詞的變化等多方面進(jìn)行分析判斷,找出錯(cuò)誤加以修改.

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