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4．I often dream of being a teacher．I dream of standing in the platform in the classroom and give lessons to lovely boys and girls．I teach them，play with them，watch them growing up．I am always young when I was staying with them．I know there is not easy to be a teacher．Without enough knowledges，you can never teach good．Besides，you have to make friends with your pupils and take good care of him．Though I am a student now，but I will work very hard to make my dream comes true．

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分析 作者在本文中陳述了自己的理想--成為一名老師．作者認為要想成為一名老師，不僅要有充分的文化知識，還得把學生當作朋友，照顧好學生．

解答 I often dream of being a teacher．I dream of standing in the platform in the classroom and give lessons to lovely boys and girls．I teach them，play with them，w∧atch them growing up．I am always young when I was staying with them．I know there is not easy to be a teacher．Without enough knowledges，you can never teach good．Besides，you have to make friends with your pupils and take good care of him．Though I am a student now，but I will work very hard to make my dream comes true．
詳解：
1．in改為on；考查介詞，stand on the platform是固定搭配，意為"站在教室的講臺上面"．
2．give改為giving；考查非謂語動詞，此處giving和前面的standing是并列成分，用在介詞of之后，故形式要保持一致，用動名詞形式．
3．watch前面加and；考查并列成分，多個成分并列時，最后兩個并列內(nèi)容之間加and．
4．was改為am；考查動詞的時態(tài)，根據(jù)上下文時態(tài)可知用一般現(xiàn)在時．
5．there改為it；考查固定句式，此處用it作賓語從句中的形式主語，真正的主語為不定式短語to be a teacher．
6．knowledges改為knowledge；考查名詞，knowledge是不可數(shù)名詞，沒有單復數(shù)變化．
7．good改為well；考查副詞，此處用副詞作狀語修飾謂語動詞teach，good是形容詞，其副詞形式是well．
8．him改為them；考查人稱代詞，此處代詞指代的是前文的復數(shù)名詞pupils，故用復數(shù)形式．
9．去掉but；考查連詞，though引導讓步狀語從句時不能與but連用，故去掉but．
10．comes改為come；考查省to不定式，此處make為使役動詞，后面接不帶to的動詞不定式作賓語補足語．

點評 短文改錯題首先要整體理解短文意思，抓住中心思想，結合語境和上下文關系，充分運用平時掌握的固定搭配，習慣用法，句型結構等等來發(fā)現(xiàn)文章的錯誤之處，加以修正．