How to Keep Healthy | |
Diet | Keep a balanced diet,take vitamins,… |
Sleep | eight hours of sleep,… |
Exercise | do regular exercise,… |
Relaxation | … |
Other Aspects | fresh air,… |
分析 本篇書面表達(dá)屬于圖表類作文,根據(jù)提示信息討論"How to Keep Healthy"..寫作時注意以下幾點:1、仔細(xì)閱讀有關(guān)提示,弄清試題提供的所有信息,明確幾個要點:分別從Diet,Sleep,Exercise,Relaxation和Other Aspects幾個方面來討論該話題 2、圖表是文章的總體框架,要在圖表的范圍內(nèi)進(jìn)行分析、構(gòu)思和想象.要依據(jù)提示情景或詞語,按照一定邏輯關(guān)系來寫.本文寫作時可以按照要點所給的順序?qū)懀?、根據(jù)要表達(dá)的內(nèi)容確定句子的時態(tài)、語態(tài);就本文而言應(yīng)該用一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài).4.注意使用高級詞匯和句式,以增加文章的亮點.
【亮點說明】本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊,層次分明,而且使用了多種表達(dá):make a survey on…就…展開調(diào)查;keep a balanced diet 保持均衡飲食;keep in mind that…牢記…;it is of great use for sb.to do sth.對某人而言做某事非常有用;provide sb.with sth.提供給某人某物;set aside 留出
解答 How to Keep Healthy
Last week,our school made a survey on how to keep healthy.This activity aroused great interest among students and we collected many useful suggestions.(高分句型) Firstly,we are encouraged to keep a balanced diet and take vitamins.Secondly,please keep in mind that it is of great use for students to have eight hours of sleep,for it provides us with enough energy to study.(高分句型)At the same time,we are required to pay much attention to doing regular exercise,which is a golden opportunity for us to strengthen our physical health.(高分句型)In addition,there are many other aspects contributing to our fitness.Don't forget to set aside some time for fresh air and relaxation.
Through this activity,we can gain much information about keeping healthy.
點評 應(yīng)該注意適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)以使行文連貫,比如適當(dāng)選用表示因果、遞進(jìn)、轉(zhuǎn)折關(guān)系的連接詞,使文章流暢、通順,并避免因反復(fù)使用句式相同的簡單句而造成的單調(diào)感.(1)認(rèn)真審題,確定體裁. (2)構(gòu)思要點.根據(jù)題目要求,理解要表達(dá)的要點.設(shè)計好文章的層次段落,考慮所用時態(tài)、人稱等,把要點串聯(lián)起來,構(gòu)成文章框架.(3)選詞造句,避難選易.(4)認(rèn)真檢查,避免錯誤.仔細(xì)閱讀全文,查找是否有錯,注意時態(tài)、單詞拼寫、字母大小寫、標(biāo)點是否有誤,句式是否正確.邏輯是否一致.
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